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This makes no sense. If he's so stuck on Kat then why even bother with this harem? He's grown up enough to do all these things but not enough to tell these girls they don't even stand a chance? He's selfish to not even consider them. If he's only going to be with one girl and that girl may not even exist anymore and even if she does it'll probably be a while before he could figure it out then all of the words spent on the romance is just a waste. My main point: If there's literally no point to it (e.g. the harem) then you shouldn't spend so much time writing about it. Either develop it or let it go.
Overall the story is pretty generic but not necessarily bad. It's really the characters that are bad. The MC is supposed to have some sort of pro gamer background but from the start he never acts like that. Somehow he gets instantly dumb then gets a stereotypical snarky Fairy who is supposed to be a guide. The two of them combined are too annoying to continue reading.
I think more context is needed because what does world class actually mean? The same goes for the stats. I can tell almost doubling his stats was a huge jump considering normally you only get 3 stat points per level but how do his stats compare to everyone else? Other than that it's been good so far.
I feel like this is selfish and lacking foresight (which I guess should be expected at his age). He mentioned how strong all the demons were so he could have pointed this out and used all those gates to train up more people. He can't fight all the demons if it comes to an all out war...
This whole thing with his sister is really annoying. It's barely believable that MC is the same level as these people who have spent months in game after a few weeks but his sister is somehow already the same level and has such good equipment she can just ignore it?
So based on this less phases = less powerful does that mean what is learned at later stages will always be a less powerful technique? Or are there techniques that can only be learned at later stages because they are more powerful? e.g. a technique that could be learned at stage 1 but only has 3 phases vs a technique that could only be learned at stage 6 but also only has 3 phases
I guess I thought Luke knew based on his interaction with Elen and the other family members so if he doesn't then that makes sense. I'm also basing thinks on my culture where someone like Abby might talk to her parents and say something like "you'll never believe who I saw." From context it seems this culture is more reserved and secretive along with not spending a lot of time with family so it makes sense. I'm just glad he isn't running around with a mask and an edgy nickname like so many other stories like this đ
I really appreciate how you emphasize that cultivation isn't the entirety of these people's lives. Especially how you had Ruth change from what seemed like a single minded cultivator to someone who wants to explore other things. I never understand MCs that do nothing but try and gain strength but do nothing else. Even if they claim they're trying to protect friends and family they never spend time with them so what's the point?