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Robert_Hamilton_9454

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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    Since when does he need to eat them? He's always just used his power to absorb them before...

    Ch 540 Chapter 540 - Demands
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    The Last Primal
    Fantasy ¡ Shaele
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    This makes no sense. If he's so stuck on Kat then why even bother with this harem? He's grown up enough to do all these things but not enough to tell these girls they don't even stand a chance? He's selfish to not even consider them. If he's only going to be with one girl and that girl may not even exist anymore and even if she does it'll probably be a while before he could figure it out then all of the words spent on the romance is just a waste. My main point: If there's literally no point to it (e.g. the harem) then you shouldn't spend so much time writing about it. Either develop it or let it go.

    Ch 457 Chapter 457 - Getting ready to leave
    altalt
    The Last Primal
    Fantasy ¡ Shaele
    detail
  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Posted

    Overall the story is pretty generic but not necessarily bad. It's really the characters that are bad. The MC is supposed to have some sort of pro gamer background but from the start he never acts like that. Somehow he gets instantly dumb then gets a stereotypical snarky Fairy who is supposed to be a guide. The two of them combined are too annoying to continue reading.

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    Second World
    Games ¡ UnrivaledArcaner
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    I think more context is needed because what does world class actually mean? The same goes for the stats. I can tell almost doubling his stats was a huge jump considering normally you only get 3 stat points per level but how do his stats compare to everyone else? Other than that it's been good so far.

    Ch 9 Evolution
    altalt
    The Adventure Addict
    Fantasy ¡ Kakashi_PCB
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    How about a dao of cloning/replication since besides the traits and treasures that has been his biggest help. Imagine his subordinates being able to produce clones as well. He'd still be able to take OP to another level 🤣

    Ch 897 The Animus Universe! I
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games ¡ Adui
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Replied to Alkor_Crowly

    Also, the sword said is a grand one but the summoning one is a lesser. That definitely seems backwards as even Noah pointed out so a lesser dao of time should be possible.

    Ch 897 The Animus Universe! I
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games ¡ Adui
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    I feel like this is selfish and lacking foresight (which I guess should be expected at his age). He mentioned how strong all the demons were so he could have pointed this out and used all those gates to train up more people. He can't fight all the demons if it comes to an all out war...

    Ch 206 Two Months
    altalt
    Omni-Mastery
    Games ¡ LightningAsura
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    This makes no sense. He's a summoner but he can't use his summons? They should be judging how well he uses and has raised his summons not just how good he is at combat as an individual.

    Ch 348 Battle with an Anubis II
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    Omega Summoner
    Games ¡ XiaoKongxu
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    This whole thing with his sister is really annoying. It's barely believable that MC is the same level as these people who have spent months in game after a few weeks but his sister is somehow already the same level and has such good equipment she can just ignore it?

    Ch 189 Inside the Vault
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    Omega Summoner
    Games ¡ XiaoKongxu
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    She really isn't a very good "sister"

    Ch 188 Barbegazi’s Last Command
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    Omega Summoner
    Games ¡ XiaoKongxu
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Replied to Fartbrain50

    They should all learn that skill really

    Ch 502 502. Call For A Hero
    altalt
    Master of none
    Fantasy ¡ 1King_Rep1
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    So based on this less phases = less powerful does that mean what is learned at later stages will always be a less powerful technique? Or are there techniques that can only be learned at later stages because they are more powerful? e.g. a technique that could be learned at stage 1 but only has 3 phases vs a technique that could only be learned at stage 6 but also only has 3 phases

    Ch 256 Release Us From This Burden
    altalt
    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Replied to RVN_1998

    I guess I thought Luke knew based on his interaction with Elen and the other family members so if he doesn't then that makes sense. I'm also basing thinks on my culture where someone like Abby might talk to her parents and say something like "you'll never believe who I saw." From context it seems this culture is more reserved and secretive along with not spending a lot of time with family so it makes sense. I'm just glad he isn't running around with a mask and an edgy nickname like so many other stories like this 😁

    Ch 109 Physical Examination
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    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    I really appreciate how you emphasize that cultivation isn't the entirety of these people's lives. Especially how you had Ruth change from what seemed like a single minded cultivator to someone who wants to explore other things. I never understand MCs that do nothing but try and gain strength but do nothing else. Even if they claim they're trying to protect friends and family they never spend time with them so what's the point?

    Ch 148 Dry City Cultivation Tower 3
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    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Replied to DO6504

    Divine sense is usable but I'm not entirely sure if that proves anything but based on all the other evidence I'd say at least some of them are like the treasures.

    Ch 459 Please Carry Me
    altalt
    Cultivation Online
    Games ¡ MyLittleBrother
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    He didn't give his last name but at least two prominent family members are there who know who he is...

    Ch 109 Physical Examination
    altalt
    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
    detail
  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    How exactly is he hiding his cultivation speed if these people can easily find out about his coma and lack of prior cultivation...

    Ch 103 Capital City
    altalt
    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Replied to TrollLord_200

    Agreed and he even said just a couple of chapters back he wanted to hide his strength. 8 years should be nothing in the cultivation world and he would still be under 30 (I think that was the age limit).

    Ch 37 Information
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    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    He said earlier he doesn't want people to know his strength but now he's going to fight in a famous tournament...

    Ch 36 Unexpected Encounter
    altalt
    The Rise of the Black Plain
    Fantasy ¡ RVN_1998
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  • Robert_Hamilton_9454
    Robert_Hamilton_94542yr
    Commented

    I'm really confused. If MC is struggling with mana control and even Lilith took some much time to learn it, how is Bing Xue already seemingly so good at it?

    Ch 70 Beginning to clear the exit path
    altalt
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy ¡ XIETIAN
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