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oh gd....who is his mate?
this sentence should actually be banned for you to tell!
i don't know why...but i am not sad for her even a bit...but ELIAS calling him out Dad ...for the last time...its aching my heart
yrr...nhi olz...author you are so cruel !!!!!...aT this moment i reallly hate yoou
oh god!.....noooooooooo
great relationships
frustating!....those grandpa & greatgrandpa...must not allowed to see their grandchildren & greatgrand children physically!..
i have heard that fights also happens, when the reason is a woman.....and that can be shown here....coz of irene!!....this lucifer...he is fighting with his own granddaughter to gain back his wife...how he had said...my sweet!.....oh...that actually took my heart...& here...his grand son in law....he is fighting for his life that's heaven .....oh my god...such plotting ....within a family....really..internal integration is veryyyyyy important.....in a family ! oh i m spouting nonsense! bye
The story plot is actually good...but the way its written here, is not fulfilling my thirst / quench, to love it (story) like hell...and these last paragraphs of what's gonna happen next is bad...its taking up many lines...it can be of just 2 lines.
it was so easy?....wasn't it?
i m sooo happy😭