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AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE

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2021-02-26 JoinedIndia
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE4mth
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    destruction magic

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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE5mth
    Commented

    mid battle this type of talk

    "That's....no way, gold dust, do you even have the Kekkei Genkai of the third Kazekage and his apprentice?" started asking question after question to Custus as if she no longer cared about her injuries or exhaustion.
    A new Rasa in Naruto world
    Anime & Comics · Shadow7Blue
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE5mth
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    Main character Personality Sucks24hrs Ranting....

    The Tale of Some Random Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · NONAMEFORBIDDEN
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE5mth
    Commented

    idiot mc, no plan, no calm thinking and knowing this world still .act lika a 10yr kid

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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE5mth
    Replied to venerable_priest

    when dude?

    The scene from when Madara split mountain using his susanoo's sword came to my mind and I could not help but shiver from excitement because if I trained in the way of sword , I could definitely do the same feat with less chakra and more precision. When that time came , I could fight with the likes of Hashirama. Why wouldn't I be excited ?
    I Became Konoha Jounin From the Start..
    Anime & Comics · Gursimran_Singh_8817
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE5mth
    Commented

    what a fool.. they had to do that because in elemental state sucks the physical energy..

    Josh instead kept himself as lightning and only controlled himself to be normal when he needed to be. That way, anyone who makes the mistake of trying to ambush him will pay dearly. Some of the animals had to find out the hard way.
    [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime
    Others · HaremQueen
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE6mth
    Commented

    i hate lottery the most

    Why does he describe it as similar to a low-quality online game? Because the page that appeared in front of him has only three options in total: character, lottery, and inventory.
    Golden Sacred Dragon of Douluo Dalu
    Book&Literature · AllHeavenThearch
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE11mth
    Commented

    what a stupidity .... all of his points are wasted No VIP store potion now...is there a point for being knowing futurethose potion should have great booster

    Ch 12 Tiny Ripples
    The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory
    Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Replied to ThinDeer

    yeah

    Naruto: Getting Rich in Sunagakure
    Anime & Comics · Raitei
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Commented

    Finally we got see a fanfic with pure haki. i was very excited about reading this fanfic and i loved the first eight chapter but what a pity there are no more updates.. it truly destroyed my excitement with such late release

    Ch 8 First blood
    One Piece: The Pinnacle
    Anime & Comics · Fargouz
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Replied to Charizard6

    ok, no problem good luck for your novel then👍🏿

    Ch 46 Just some ideas I have
    Naruto : The Demon Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Charizard6
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Replied to Charizard6

    bleach template system is also is one of the best concept because in nnaruto hakra is physical + spritiual power, u can same for bleach in shinigami but please use only one template beacuse there are many fanfic where authors has used many zanpakuto which makes it complicated and undesirable to read for many readers, telling u after reading the reviews my fav character is captain commander, ryujin jakka a very cool power and four basic shinigami power are alo good it is an overall fighting system which will be good just dont use ichigo template because till now many people even didn't understand what the real zanpakuto spirit of ichigo is my personal fav character as i have before is captain commander but this concept have been used before so it will not become any popular if u ask my personal opinion for your new novel so it should byakuya template because his bankai has very limitless potential as shown in bleach his bankai petals can takes the form of any type like swords just imagine increasing its power and u get an shirou like poewer unlimited blades work that would be super cool i hope if u make template system concept then make sure even after reaching 100% the mc can get stronger more because byaguya is strong but not strong enough to face ohtutsuki like character mc can develop his zanketsu or something hodo and bakudo skills more after 100 percent just limit thec to bankai sorry for rough english... i am quite bad at it

    Ch 46 Just some ideas I have
    Naruto : The Demon Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Charizard6
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Commented

    just use haki.. because haki is the simplest and greatest potential it has in one piece there is limit to haki like Observation haki can see in the future until 10 seconds(shanks), for armament it is its hardness and internal destruction and for conquerer its fusion with the body itself but in narutoverse u can destroy that limit because is the power of will or spiritual manifestaion of power , the stronger the will or spiritual power the stronger the haki many people will love this development because it is a simple concept compare to complicated stuff that you have mentioned haki is limitless even kaguya level ishiki level or even higher can be reached if practiced in a right way and most importantly no auther has used this concept it will be very fun to read ishki level fights, armament haki strong enough that can break space itself , obesrvation haki powerfull enough to watch future upto 50 sec or your own differnt idea and conquerer has the greatest potential as it is forcing your will itself just imagining iits higher form will be fasicnating you can alslo use simple system in it, nor the complicated like store, gachha wheel or something there are many novels like that i believe people will love proficiency or skill points system where it is simple and easy to understand and read and haki abilities with no limits unlike in one piece where yonko level haki is limit (shanks roger garp). i hope u like my suggestion

    Ch 46 Just some ideas I have
    Naruto : The Demon Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Charizard6
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Commented

    one piece

    -One piece
    Naruto : The Demon Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Charizard6
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  • AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE
    AAKASHDEEP_RATHORE1yr
    Commented

    this is truly stupid

    Ch 54 Retreat
    Bleach: Another Story
    Anime & Comics · some_writer
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