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I the only one who finds this shit so confusing? why do you have to incorporate several worlds into your novel, didn't anyone tell you that it's a bad idea and never works? At least I've never seen a novel that contains several worlds, whether MC moves between them or they merge into one world and it works. You may find some encouragement at first, but quickly the readers will get bored and start complaining about the complexity of the story and the many temptations and mistakes that you will undoubtedly make (English is not my first language )
It is true that Emma is a merciful and passionate queen but also smart and she will not suggest to the king anything that might anger the lords of Westeros and the followers of the seven fanatics, especially since everyone still remembers what happened with the Major the cruel
Danzo must get away with it ، It's too early for him to die, and without him Orchimaru wouldn't be Orchimaru, Aktsuki wouldn't come into being, Sakumo would live, and Hokage might become. In short, if Danzo dies, MC future information becomes useless. Although some may think that he doesn't need that information with his power, let me remind you that Hashirama, Yagami Uchiha, and Patriarch Azumaki were stronger than him, and yet they died young ، So I think in order to keep the novel realistic, Mc must move from direct bloody fighting to political and information fighting. (English is not my first language )
Suppose MC has big ambitions and does not plan to take shelter in Crackclaw until the storm passes, so I don't see the point of developing it, perhaps if you start working ten years ago, but only one year, you cannot achieve any achievement, not even in our world with all the technology, means of communication and professional labor, not to mention a world that just moves orders from place to place that takes hours and days.... Regarding the last point, I hope you realize that the invasion of the valley and the imposition of your authority on it are two different things, and you have a lesson in Igon, he certainly managed to conquer Duran completely, but was he able to impose his authority on On it? think you know the answer.
I don't see any way that MC can be one of the main parties in the War of the Five Kings, and I also see no point in developing a worthless place like this one year before a war that will eat green and dry, Shouldn't you focus on developing a profitable trade to equip your troops with the best equipment, at least that's how you'll be in the best of Negotiating the price of joining a certain party.