Universal truth - well thought Sunny

Maybe it was a titan even… How powerful to make them all disappear. Reminds of the Hollow Mountains and the forgotten shore

I like story and writing so far, but if you wanna use stereotypes like abusive patriarchy or men in general, you should use them in action and happenings. Simply let actions inside the story speak for themselves. They don’t need to be verbally outspoken so often in inner dialogue or narrative judgment. Any statement becomes rather forced, meek and insecure like this. This is a personal opinion of course, but a very famous author once said, that writing is like magic. Not everything needs to be outspoken or described into detail, but the reader will still understand.

What an interesting setup^^

Unfair? Or does it just feel not right!

LuvU2😂

Thank you for the chapter - very much appreciated;) Love to get more of course!

A man and his loyal steed^^

Let the party begin^^

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I am not ambitious, but I think I deserve to win.

Hope it’ll be interesting:)

Nice chap!

I wonder how this might play out^^

Nice one!!

Now they are talking^^

Keep it up - nice chap!!

Thank You for the chap^^

Thank You for the chap^^

Thx 4 the chap!! Excruciating slow releases - but that’s a given here^^