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Daoistcioglq1yrCommentedJudy is also a female name. the male version is Jude.
"So I spoke with Reina today and they've going to move over to Lincolnshire," Emily explained to her fiancée Judy of the wedding plans, "Along with their triple troubles - hopefully, they don't set the palace on fire- although that would be fun to watch. The palace is so calm sometimes I wonder if it's a graveyard. I can't help but wonder how the queen survives there. No offense, Judy, but being royalty is so boring. But don't worry, I'll always find ways to liven the place, and..." that was when Emily realized the person she has been talking to over the past five minutes has not said a word.- Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
caution to the Wind, not window.
"I don't know," He shrugged, "You just felt kind of different. With all the girls I've been with, I was sure of our destination, the endpoint. Yeah. But with you?" he took a deep breath, "I wasn't even sure of what I was doing…" He turned to look her in the eyes, saying, "I had no sense of navigation with you. You were a breath of fresh air, so I threw caution to the window," - Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
the proper word for a person serving drinks in a bar is :waitress. Stewardess serves on an airplane. I hope his helps with editing. 😊
"Get away!" he snapped at the stewardess who had returned once more. - Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
the proper word is Park. you cannot park here. not pack. just trying to help.
"Excuse me, sir " a man in uniform came up to them, "You can't pack here. This is private property," - Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
Cecile, not Cecil.
"Of course, your whore of a daughter called Cecil, who were you expecting?" Fernandez sneered. - Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
Thank you for finally spelling Cecile correctly. calling a woman Cecil was driving me nuts. just like a boy named Julie? that's a girls name. FYI.
The choice will always be there, but Cecile wasn't sure she was ready to make that choice yet. She has been doing well with it over the years, why change now? - Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
who is Damon?
"I shouldn't have said this..." I was already on the verge of tears when Damon suddenly lifted me in the air along with the sheet and twirled me in the air which made me scream from terror; that was so unexpected. - Daoistcioglq1yrCommented
maybe if he explained his plan to her, she wouldn't misunderstand his intentions.
The thought of her getting over him aggravated him to the core, he just needed a bit of time. Why couldn't she give him that? - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
please edit more carefully. this is very difficult to read with the misspellings of words, improper use of words and very little grammar is used. SMDH.
Edited by: nalyn - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
who is Alice? popped up out of no where. oh! 🤦♀️you mean alicia. edit better PLEASE!.
"What did you say to have them kiss you on the cheek." Alice asked with curiosity. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
its sore spot. soar is to fly.
"But it is true, is it not? That you are just someone begging favour from her majesty who is married to our king." Theon continued rubbing on my soar spot. "Just because you are wallowing in your own one sided love to her majesty, you will also put another woman in the same fate as you. Just wake up! There is no place for you here!" - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
taught to do. not Thought.
Gladiolus' manhood had gotten very hard and Anatalia had deemed it to be ready. She saddled up on Gladiolus' body and positioned herself as she was thought to do. His eyes opened briefly and saw Anatalia on top of him. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
HER SON. the queen us a female. 🤦♀️
"Gladiolus!" Queen Patricia showed genuine concern and wanted to tend to his son. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
off the hook. not out of. lol
I looked at the middle-aged man who was begging for leniency. House arrest is the most lenient punishment I can give to his daughter, but with my experience with foolish girls in the past, I cannot just let her out of the hook. Some of them tend to take revenge if their lives were spared, thus I made the punishment of seducing a monarch is death. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
its hole in the floor. the whole floor has holes in it. see the difference
The boss' body gad a strong impact that it made a huge whole onto the wooden floorboards of the first floor. Smoke from the impact spread all over the first floor receiving area. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
thick. the fog was thick.
After my words, fire rained down from the sky. The fog that was so think quickly dissipated when the fire came into contact on the ground. Tempest wings were on fire, it was beautiful and majestic to look at. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
cooped up.
Snow has been copped up inside the Jennovian palace when we were there. After escaping, I am sure she longed to be free roaming around once again. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
way up not wat. are they electrical . haha edit better maybe? lol
I looked at the chapel which is small compared to those large churches in big cities and capitals. The walls of the building are decorated with beautiful vined flowers, creeping its wat up. The garden outside the chapel also gives a subtle elegance and makes the place more serene. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
his Sword. the high priest is a man.
"Then be safe your majesty." The high priest bowed and gave the queen her sword. He stood up and carried Prince Gladiolus with the help of a palace guard and retreated. - Daoistcioglq2yrCommented
her men. the queen is a woman.
"Get him!" The queen ordered his men. "Anyone that can kill that son of a b*tch will be rewarded handsomely."