I was here about a week ago, and it was about 12 pages but this was the most drastic change of pages I’ve ever seen and the story all in all it’s by far one of the most taken care of Webb novels I’ve seen, thank you for this. 10/10
Honestly a really good concept, but the grammar is below average. All in all great story. Also maybe better placement with my own opinion it should have a bit more explaining on where the chapter takes place and in the middle and end.