still spent 40 bucks to read an unfinished book that no one seems to be in a hurry to finish MASSIVE disappointment. I only stay to finish this story then I'm DONE

And complaining to the app owners does no good. Admittedly, the errors seem somewhat less but they're charging 2-3 times what one would pay for a regular, edited properly, no repeated chapters book. Plus half the "chapters" end with a paragraph or two about piracy. Ain't nobody pirating this. Too many errors and not enough content

You lecture about piracy as you flaunt a book riddled with spelling and grammatical errors and have the nerve to sell it for 5 tines the price of a properly done novel. Lower your prices to reflect the miniscule content of each chapter we pay for or make proper chapters and, for God's sake, FIX THE ERRORS. This story, other than all the wasted space of repeating content and preaching about piracy (and the above mentioned errors and pricing) is well thought out with fresh new faces to add to my fantasy collection. But stop preaching about piracy while robbing your readers blind in the process.