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Nice character development. Not a lot of world view though. Would like to see more background. Perhaps a backstory or 2. More about the sisters

nice story line

I like the story line

good story line so far

the grammar needs a lot of work. but hte storyline is well thought out and i like all the intrigue, it tends to keep you guessing. i cant wait to see what happens next

i agree

this story took a twist

i agree

i like where the story ;ine is going

there are a lot of grammar mistakes in this novel that should be corrected in english for a better reading experience. but i do enjoy the story line very much

i agree

good chapter

i agree

good chapter

i agree

strong character development

i like the suspense and storyline. i am sure it will all work out in the end. they have to want to fight for their relationship and if your family doesnt accept your lifestyle then they dont respect your ***** choices

i agree

great chapter