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De4dlyW0lf

De4dlyW0lf

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2021-02-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf2mth
    Replied to MUSSIC_L0VER

    honestly the update schedule will be every 2-3 weeks, but wont start till after march 12, i am going to be at a convention for a week and won't have time to work on it.

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
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    Hey! Thank you for reading this story. I do have bad news however, im getting surgery on Saturday, so the story will enter a brief hiatus until I’m not on pain medication. It’s not a life threatening thing, but will make it easier to live day by day. I’ll be back soon! Wish me luck!

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    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to ThreshGasm

    I ended up removing the system rather than try to keep track of all the things nescessary for that…my Google sheets was a nightmare…but I digress. In the first chapter, Demaris utilizes martial skills and various magics through his technology.

    Demaris knows he cannot afford to be on the defensive, so he prepares his next attack. Drawing upon his Magic, he unleashes the Whirlwind Slice martial skill, a powerful AOE wind attack that sends a violent gust of air swirling around him. The giant rat is momentarily disoriented by the force of the wind, its massive body buffeted by the gale. The iron swords blade shatters, only a few inches of jagged metal remain.
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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to ThreshGasm

    Thank you for your comment. Demaris isn’t perfect and has a past to overcome. He fought a war for 13 years against the demons, having PTSD from said war. While devils are different from demons, Demaris is struggling to tell the difference between the two when he calls Rias a demon or devil or whatever because they both emanate an ‘evil’ kind of miasma. Hope this helps!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to Gh0st00

    Thank you for reading my story, Consider reading it again one day!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Commented

    After rereading the story up to this point, I've found quite a number of inconsistencies; personality, and character choices, also kinda forgot about the game system at times, lacking character descriptions... I'm going to step back and do quality control. new chapters will be posted after I am done adjusting the already-completed chapters. I'm not trying to alter my story to the reviews, I want to give the story more life. Also, I honestly struggle to keep track of the game aspect of the story, what would you guys recommend to better keep track of stats? though, given that I already don't like keeping track of the stats I might remove the system altogether, but make his mutant ability straight-up ID create. I have far more free time now that the semester is over and will be focusing on writing. Thank you for reading my story, it means a lot to me!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to Sandford_96

    Thank you for reading the story nonetheless!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to ThreshGasm

    That is true, there is always room for improvement in my writing. I do try to consider all the angles in each interaction, perhaps I'm dumbing him down too much, but everyone gets a wake-up call one day and Demaris's wake-up call is inevitable. Thank you for reading my story!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to Fi3l

    I really like the comments! It is in fact dumb to reveal one’ abilities to strangers. But the sword Saint needs allys and the 12 year old orphan side of Demaris craves connection from others, to feel a sense of belonging. Thank you for reading my story!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to Random_0P_Being

    I really like the comments! It is in fact dumb to reveal one’ abilities to strangers. But the sword Saint needs allys and the 12 year old orphan side of Demaris craves connection from others, to feel a sense of belonging. Thank you for reading my story!

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  • De4dlyW0lf
    De4dlyW0lf1yr
    Replied to Random_0P_Being

    That is a great observation. It is true that he has maturity thrust on him, but he is more than just the sword Saint. He has the memories and physical form of the twelve year old Demaris too. To put it simply, the brain development of a child allows for a keen fight or flight based on fear. Demaris has plenty of knowledge, but his brain and it’ chemistry are at a twelve year olds development. Hope this helps explain and it is my hope I can better convey this through the story.

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