JaydenLiu
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JaydenLiu2yrCommentedBuy one get one Just get the brother and he'll easily convince her
'...She is a bro-con'- JaydenLiu2yrCommented
He would be the type to watch it on the living room tv with his roommates
"Woah, Woah," Gary then raised both his hands in surrender, "I'm not racist. I will have you know that I watch interracial por--" - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
Don't kink shame...
'Oscar likes it in his ass?' - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
The thought of child support... is quite a worry
"Yep... I'm never getting 'up.'" Ja Sun looked down at his crotch. - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
Sentence weird, think "5 years ago, if someone" would be better
If 5 years ago, someone were to tell me I would take in a student, I would merely smile and look away. - JaydenLiu2yrReplied to DiligentObserver
Giddy up horsey
Hu Tao became unusually quiet. Yomite used the forbidden word just to make her shut up for a bit. - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
Woman not wife... so...
[Remember that I can hear your thoughts, boy.] The demon said coldly. [Also, what can a virgin like you know? And why in the hell are you still a virgin? I slept with my first woman when I was like half your age.] - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
Ha like my pp was even visible in the first place. Jokes on you I win
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IRL vs Online
Stop. Riley took in a long and deep breath as he tried to center his thoughts. He didn't truly realize how hard it was to be surrounded by people without his mask on. As Darkday, he could say and do anything he wanted, without any filter. - JaydenLiu2yrPosted
The story starts off with a bang. You don't know what's going on and neither does he. In the first few(around 20) chapters it introduces a LOT of things. Past that point it settles where the mystery and world building shines a lot. There are plot twists and thrilling moments shining this novel. Although this is finished I read that the second one is going to come out
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Well not his fault people don't want an awesome step-dad... or someone who can satisfy they loved ones better than they can
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The story itself is interesting with the mc's backstory helping explain a lot of his thoughts. The grammar itself sucks. A lot of pronouns switched with things like siblings-brothers when only one of the two were male. As well as like he-she or she-he or masochist-sadist. The author often switches the word with the opposite one but if you can realize which ones are switched and fix it mentally you can read it
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"Now... but right now" This just sounds weird
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Well I remember he practically raped Megumi(I think) the first time and somehow fixes the relationship
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Not even happy... just...sad :(
"Our mom isn't going to like this, and if she finds out it was you who came up with the idea... Well." Pepper couldn't finish the sentence, she just looked sad. - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
Feel like more subconsciously considering he was trained to basically seduce and prostitute himself
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Sigh it's difficult when your the most beautiful and handsome man...
No... no... Damn it! She is second only to me. - JaydenLiu2yrCommented
Such a brave sacrifice for the kids
"Well... you wouldn't lose your touch, teacher," Liu Erlong uncharacteristically praised as Bibi Dong's cheeks felt a little warmer.