Really a well written story. The quality of writing is quite good, with vocabulary that can be understood but can still be improved because there are some spelling mistakes The progress of the story is quite good because we can see progress with them moving from west blue to paradise, but it can still be improved by maybe adding a few islands outside of the canon Character Design is quite satisfying because almost all of the plots in this novel involve original characters from canon So, the whole is really a well-written novel and not just rewriting One Piece by changing the character's name a little, especially if you are interested in S and M then this story will really hook you, and if you are not interested in S and M at the end this story then you guys will be quite hooked on some S and M. But at the end of it all, here is what i feel and i understand, you are free to follow or even argue with me, just read and see if you like it, you have what you like it so don't be quickly influenced by other people's words. I use google translate so sorry if there are mistakes in my words🙏 and for authors you are free to write what you want, everyone has their own unique things, even twins. You are free to write and like S and M content, no one has the right to say otherwise. you have my support

his bad luck suddenly summoned a legendary figure that not even the navy could find, so what to expect next? met Aokiji when he was fishing? met akainu when he was shopping for clothes?

from RUMOR DEAL. TO AFTER PARTY AVATAR. THEN TO THIS and he just do nothing?

Amok?

Why not adding drama tag?

Will he continue to live like a mouse? I mean he can live like an ordinary person right?

When will 'real' plot begin?

So bassically he's still a powerless kid?

is it just me or does it seem like we lack a grudge element here?

If he's in a hurry then use that points already

Please don't tell me that the author is trying to make MC and Princess have a relationship. because it looks too pushy

has the existence of the world map been lost?

do not equate professors from the age where the law was applicable to the people who had the advantage in the law of the jungle were in effect

So, the main character will work for Japan, and we will be missing a lot of chapters again?

I began to think, maybe he alone was transferred to another world

trust me, someday, this island, will be the new kingdom

I started to think, when it comes to this point, why not move the island as well

yes baby, like chicken who can eat you back

I hope there won't be a "I'll forgive you."or "I'll give you a second chance."or worse "I hope we can live side by side"

Could you please make the time go by quickly, so we are not bored with a little progress that took several chapters? thank you🤔