Your story is a pretty good one so far. there are 2 disappointing aspects, however. first, the spellinG and grammer are quite annoying and the fact that I have to keep paying and paying to continue to read. so i will dyop now before this becomes the most expensive fictional stoRy I have ever read! Why dont you just have a fixed price for the whole series or at least a price for each volume? So bye bye, the story is ok but not so great I will keep paying as I go.