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Rafael_Lopez_Villa1dCommentednow, all the reasons I started reading this fic are gone... i will keep reading but still...
A/N: Bear with me, there are still three more backstories before reaching the main story of Slash Dog. Now that it has come to this, since being the bartender is no longer the main point of the story, I am going to rename the novel to Immortal's Omniversal Conquest.- Rafael_Lopez_Villa2dCommented
this is a bad idea, the HC should explode if they see this hahahaha
Allen's body lost weight, volume, and musculature; his height decreased rapidly, and his age changed, and in a short time, he returned to being an eleven-year-old child. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa2dCommented
Of course I understood, never more clearly, no doubt.
So Kanroji explained the "Love Breathing" to Isao and even demonstrated it. "It's like baam, boom, swish, then swap! It's like that! Do you understand?" - Rafael_Lopez_Villa2dCommented
I'm not sure but, i think there is no brave saints at this point in time.
"The materials used for these cards are far superior to those used for the Evil Pieces and Brave Saints, so the empowerment they provide is significantly greater." He continued. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa3dCommented
I'll be honest, this went from a 8.5/10 general fic to a 5/10 cultivation and 6.5/10 story, I feel there are a lot of holes, some things just happened just because, you tried to make a "serious" fic instead of the original funny/messy, it's not bad but if you try to make a "serious" and "well-planed" fic then there will be expectations, the chapters are long that's a plus, i found no mistakes, all good but still, went from a funny idea to a xianxia generic but in too early DXD, if you make a time skip from this point to where the plot starts then i would expect the MC to be max level invincible, if not, at least could be able to fight some minor gods... yeah that is the expectations this made me have.
Ch 5 Chapter 5 - End of Incident - Rafael_Lopez_Villa3dCommented
where are the courting death memes?
"Puny bat, you're courting your own death." Ryuuga grinned. This wasn't the first time he'd encountered a devil. Even in the cultivation world, there was a universe ruled by the Devil Emperor. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa4dReplied to shambe
oh, nope, it works everywhere
Because at that moment, Alexander was spanking Mikoto. After all, in his memory, the only way to discipline children was through physical punishment. If they misbehaved, what was wrong with a little spanking? - Rafael_Lopez_Villa4dPosted
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yeah, i like this update haha
Felicia - I don't understand why they're excited; it's just a very common bar... *She's in the bathtub taking a bubble bath.* - Rafael_Lopez_Villa5dCommented
i really think none of what you said was bad or should be changed, i could agree on changing getting riser's peerage, that was a bit unncecessary, but i liked everything up to this point.
So, I've decided to rewrite this story. Don't worry, the story from Lala to the latest will remain the same with some adjustments. See you after I finish them! - Rafael_Lopez_Villa5dCommented
what?
If a human used the eyes of an owl, they could mouse by the light of a match a mile away. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa5dReplied to Onigami
If you know of any FF in which the mc is a good father figure, I would appreciate it if you could give me the name!!
It is probably the first time I have decided to have his woman pregnant, but it's fine, right? - Rafael_Lopez_Villa6dCommented
please tell me NTR is a sin for her
"Because I decided it," The Goddess said. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa9dReplied to Juhiko
hahahaha my bad!
Second, based on the first point, due to Captain America's rebellion, Iron Man would likely team up with the remaining faction unwilling to sign the accords to oppose Captain America's faction. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa9dCommented
willing to sing
Second, based on the first point, due to Captain America's rebellion, Iron Man would likely team up with the remaining faction unwilling to sign the accords to oppose Captain America's faction. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa10dCommentedCh 35 90% (16 May 2024)
- Rafael_Lopez_Villa21dReplied to keke171
not gonna lie, i want the cookie
'My Orion.' - Rafael_Lopez_Villa23dCommented
yes! please tell me there will be Kuroko no basket in this fic, I beg to the gods!!!
To dodge a screen to his blind spot, as if he was already aware of it. And stealing the ball with such speed and perfect timing. Did he possess the same eyes as Akashi…? - Rafael_Lopez_Villa30dCommented
about that, he lives in marvel soooo... there may be a celestial inside the earth...
It was a reality that his life was good, he was surrounded by beautiful women, some of whom were the dream of countless people. But at the same time, he had to worry that a cosmic tentacle wouldn't emerge from the ground and end the world. - Rafael_Lopez_Villa30dCommented
I really hope it's not jjk
I plan to go with Danmachi, One Piece, or JJK, but what do you think?