Kotario writing a fanfic was a day I never thought I’d see. Excited to see where this leads to

Definitely

Yea I know the concept for the novel is so good and I enjoy smart characters so I thought Mc and ChenChens relationship would be interesting to write

Yea I am leaning towards arrowverse because it can serve as a gateway into the big leagues like comic characters and such. And it is a world that can challenge MC cause there are characters that can kill MC before he can grow and he has to deal with time travellers and the likes

Yea the reason I chose MHA was cause it is so easy to write the oversaturation of MHA fanfics on this platform has enabled me to be able to write one with my eyes closed

Funny story that was actually one of the original Essences I picked for MC but I eventually settled for the essence of rick but I will check those out and see

I haven’t read that I will read it and see if it is something I can add to the fic

You bring up very valid points and you have wonderful ideas. You are definitely right about that. Now i am tempted to rewrite the novel. would you be interested in ready a novel similar to this but given more forethought for this i didn’treally plan much for it.

I will also be adding more to the transp ortation into a new world it was met to be a major plot point later down the line

Thanks for your input could you explain a bit more on what you mean by unrealistic progression and how exactly the MC is op

Si, no te preocupes, lo explico luego y Mc también se entera de cosas como esta y las consecuencias de sus acciones y tener la inteligencia de Rick pero no actuar como tal. Tengo algo que se conecta más tarde. Yo también lo siento por lo malo. traducción Estoy usando el traductor de Google y tampoco entendí muy bien tu último mensaje. Solo recogí fragmentos, pero si no me refiero a nada que quieras que sepa, adiós.

but yea your right that was a mistake I’l correct it.

They don’ have minor re gen tho it’s usually more amped up skill like infinte regen and stuff like that my headcanon is that minor regen fixes stuff internally

He had gotten the scars before he got the skill itself. Minor regeneration doesn’ t fix scars cause it views it as there’s nothing to fix cause it’s been healed

About 1300

What would you prefer the chapter length to be (in words)

Thanks for the input.

Totally fine, Would you mind telling me what you liked and you didn’t like so as to improve my writing.

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