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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    Wow. I got nothing to say. The first part was dope!馃憦 All I could really say is I'm gonna read this one. Great job author! Keep it up! Keep writing鉂o笍

    Parshawna Macduff
    FantasyWendrila_Kundu
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
    Posted

    The synopsis wasn't quite that good but I'm hoping that the author could make it more interesting. But so far it's good, I kinda liked how you expresses the relationship with her father on the first to second part. So that's all, hope the author will improve him/her writing skills even more. Keep writing鉂o笍

    Just happened
    UrbanZenande
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    5 stars for this! All I could say that this story seems very insteresting and relatable for me. By reading only the first part I could say that this is such a good story, the english was good. The author expressed the lines very well. Good job author! Keep it up!鉂o笍

    The Freak's Secret
    TeenTimara
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    Reading the Prologue and the first part was quite good. The author seems expressed the story well, especially the relationship between his mother. Overall, it was good. Keep writing Author!鉂o笍

    The One I've been Waiting For
    TeenSadistangel026
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    Wow, this book seems very interesting... Reading the first part really hooked me well, I already got curious and excited as well. I'm just hoping her mother don't throw her anime figurines LOL馃槅. Imma add this to my library, my curiousity is killin' me!馃槅. Anyways, great job Author! Keep it up!馃憤馃挅

    It All Started At Hi!!! School (My unexpected someone)
    FantasyDrasthxce
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
    Posted

    I've read the introduction. It was actually pretty good. The way the author delivered or expressed the thoughts is great too. There were no typos, except, I saw one, but the rest were ok. I think the story is pretty interesting.

    Family Secrets
    UrbanJae
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
    Posted

    As I have read the first chapter, I can say that it's damn scary! The flow of the story was good but it's kinda confusing like what you have said in the synopsis. Though it could be even better if you have put the proper quotation like (" ") and (.) 'coz their dialogue were getting lost. The readers might not have notice that the characters were already saying their lines. So as I have said, make it clear as much as possible. There were also some wrong spelling but it's fine tho. Overall it was good, that's all! Hope this feedback will help you improve your writing. Keep writing author!鉂わ笍

    Strange Tales
    FantasyMarco
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    I must say, the synopsis wasn't really that good but based on the first chapter the author has expressed the main character's situation. The setting was easily to comprehend and the language was also good. Keep it up author!馃挀

    The lost Prince is My Lord
    Fantasyolive
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
    Posted

    The english was excellent, but I'm a bit confused of the story setting. I hope the author must improve her/his novel with this review. But anyways, keep writing author!

    REPERCUSSIONS
    FantasyAmi_yaye
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    First of all, the English was good. Based on the first chapter I can say that it was well-defined, but if I wasn't mistaken there were some quotation marks that weren't inserted right in the dialogue. I hope it will improve. Keep writing!馃憤

    The Mate Hunt
    HorrorNayramAyram
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    First of all, the English was excellent. Just reading the description you can tell that it's a good story. The first part is well-defined. The author did an amazing job. I can say it's not just good, it's a masterpiece. Keep it up!馃憤

    SULTAN
    UrbanAtinuke
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
    Posted

    Reading the first part was actually good. The author expressed how the first two characters been doing well especially how good their friendship is.

    Smile
    FantasyHawaiianpizzapie
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
    Posted

    Wow, I was still only reading the first part but it was pretty amazing already. I already hook up on this story. I'm really into this kind of story. Imma read this one. 馃檪

    Dreaming Destiny
    Fantasyglenzyeahhh
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  • Kendall_
    Kendall_3yr
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    The author expressed the story well, like how a friends treat each other and how they were obsessed with their idol. The english was pretty good also, keep it up!馃槉

    Should have been better
    Teenjoondabest
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