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mismatchmaking

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    mismatchmaking1mth
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    tftc. lucirizz strikes again.

    Ch 27 23. Childhood Friend
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    tftc!

    Ch 18 14. Going to Another Island
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    tftc! well... describing things does require practice. especially when trying to not make it sound awkward.

    Ch 17 Omake: I Really Don't Want to be Here
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    thanos for the chappie! enjoy peakcony.

    Ch 14 11. Primal Beast Tiamat 4
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    oh dear... tftc!

    Ch 11 April Fools Event: Still in Different Timeline
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    zam. I'm wanting more of this timeline now. surely omakes? tftc!

    Ch 10 April fools Event : Different Timeline?
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    thanks for the chapter! since you asked for feedback, i'll just nitpick a small part. The plot should flow well, and relationships between characters should remain consistent. In particular when Lyria thought about her memories with Rei. Did they just not recently meet? You could go about it something along the lines of "Although having only met for a short time". Other than that, relationships moving pretty fast with no real reason(?) at least in my view. once again, thanks for the chapter and keep going!

    Ch 7 06. Girl in Blue 5
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    tftc. GIVE PRAISE FOR HE HAS NO EQUAL

    Ch 6 05. Girl in Blue 4
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Video Games · IamReallySalad
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    mismatchmaking2mth
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    ill pray for you.

    Luo Mo stared at Theresa's sudden burst of enthusiasm and wondered what exactly she was imagining. Honestly, Kongming's story was about to get a whole lot darker... but Theresa didn't need to know about that just yet.
    Making Honkai Impact III in the world where Kallen exists
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    mismatchmaking4mth
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    For a moment, it was as if something had broken inside Isaac— and felt like time had stopped.
    Genshin: The Serenity System
    Video Games · Unusual_
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