This has been a big disappointment. I truely thought this could be a good fanfic, but I've been proven wrong. The usual 'young master reaching the heavens god like being with op system edge lord' thinking they're better than everyone, but is a braindead moron.

It has so far being bland and tasteless. The concept is good and all, but it gets boring pretty quick. And the Author throwing curfballs of plot twist doesn't make it better.

I think they meant as a prodigy of the area he came from.

Wouldn't his first name be last? Freeman D. Kaden. Like every other character in one piece?

Hey, wanted to ask something. When you Upload a chapter, do you use the App from webnovel or something else ?

It is good. Don't drop it. Pacing does feel slow, considering how many chapters are about the same thing. The characters are a bit narrow minded.

Utter garbage. There were better fanfiction from chinese to english translations then this one. Several Fanfiction from this User are stolen from other websites with no credit given to the Author of those storys.

Maybe it's like the dark dark fruit from teach. It's classified as a logia but he can't transform into darkness.

🤣🤣 so true

Sharlussy got me acting.

*Fischer

Boa is 31. Bisher Tiger freed them when she was 16. That was 15 years before Canon.

It could be. What I belive would happen is that our mc replaces Cedric. Think of it: The deatheaters need Harry's blood. So Moody would place both Harry's and Abe's name in. Killing two birds with one stone.

Hey man. I wanted to ask how far you are with avatar the last airbender . We all miss you man.

So when can we expect your return ?

This has been the worst fanfic i have seen so far. Nothing making this interesting . Everytime the Author forgets to inspect his chapter for gramma errors. The story is just thrown into it like it's no big deal.

Is it dropped or are taking a break?

Till now, no new updated chapters. The slow pacing is both good and bad. The lenght of each chapter is also an insult. Creative is it not. It also reapeats itself more then once on the same theme without progressing in the story. Doesn't make it want to read it.

Would be funny if you stick to him being ivisible.

Lie