Jessica_Mahmood
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Jessica_Mahmood3yrCommentedYou specifically mention you need to watch for parental guidance as she is only 14 years old...this whole thing is a well written story line but the "e***ww" factor of it being her groomed for him as young girls are by older men is just disgusting. Change her age and I wouldn't have "this is going to be statutory rape" playing on repeat in my head.
Ch 18 First kiss- Jessica_Mahmood3yrCommented
Totally inappropriate..She is only 14...change her age by 3 years to make this acceptable
Our eyes met once again. His gaze locked mine in place. I can feel his thumb gently caress my plump lips. - Jessica_Mahmood3yrCommentedCh 14 Confrontation (2)
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typo "princes"
"Young Lord William please keep an eye on princes Alicia." Leon told William.