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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus2yr
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    The Giant Crabs looked like a battalion of soldiers when placed together like this. Their fiery red eyes glowed in the darkness of the cave, their super sharp claws glinted under the illumination of the faint light going in.
    Ocean Master
    Fantasy · GREAT
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus2yr
    Replied to Typhlix

    I think that the situation in where a heart splashes blood accidentally in someone mouth and gets gulped down just when he needed is forced. I thought some other ways it could be done (not that you should use them, they are just opinions) but for example, it would be less forced if you said he was taken by instinct and licked the blood on his hands, or that his whole existence clammed for blood with strong genes so his vampire side simply controlled the blood in his mouth direction. Or you could have opened Multiple injuries in him and said one of them was splashed with the blood and his body drew it inside when it sensed the strong blood, reacting fiercely.

    Unconsciously, he swallowed down the blood as he fell to the ground, struggling to reach for his backpack.
    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus2yr
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    extremely forced.

    Unconsciously, he swallowed down the blood as he fell to the ground, struggling to reach for his backpack.
    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus2yr
    Commented

    that's... forced.

    As he stabbed his fingers into the throws year students chest, crushing his heart. Blood from the young man's heart splattered in all directions, and some even entered David's mouth.
    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Replied to gamabunda4873

    (small spoiler ahead, I guess) Non existent up to where I read which is around 175+

    Closed Beta That Only I Played
    Fantasy · basso77
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    ??? at least tell me you will deny it later.

    David stared at Dravin hard and his teeth creaked loudly as he gritted them very hard. "... Fine! Send me the Gyno points and let me get out of here." David felt like if he stayed another minute here, he might just really beat the bastard up.
    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    wait, does he need to waste his mana to learn stuff ?

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    Master of none
    Fantasy · 1King_Rep1
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Replied to Boynty

    huh... Well to be honest there's quite a few plot holes/things that don't make sense in the start and most of the time mc is really just hunting(small time skips), NPC nearly don't get attention, the quests itself are said to be rare to find, mc is overpowered, and the only reason someone would have to read is that same overpowered mc, and fhe fact this is a virtual reality game, personally I read because I love to read about someone doing hard quests and receiving great rewards, getting more op... and overpowered traits/innate talents in games are just that appealing to me, even if the overall story is not all that good. Resuming: if you like RPG and games you should try it out even if you get a bit angry at the start, you should give it a chance and see if you will stay for the op stuff or leave for not being able to turn off a few parts of your brain. (tip: don't read comments they will tell you just make you more angered at the story.)

    Closed Beta That Only I Played
    Fantasy · basso77
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    the cliche of walking away...

    Han Xiao instantly turned around and began to walk away.
    The Legendary Mechanic
    Games · Qi Peijia
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Replied to Boynty

    that's not it. There is NPCs but mc loves grinding monsters so, he does exactly that all the time, so there is no npc in the closed beta part, npcs only appear later when he is playing the open game.

    Closed Beta That Only I Played
    Fantasy · basso77
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
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    Pathetic. You are in another world with obvious differences and now you even found a dark elf, you can't call yourself a cultured person if you didn't think of magic maybe being real. Even if it isn't you are pathetic because you scream out loud your thoughts in surprise, I hate your existence just for that fact.

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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    it is?

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    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    he got so excited with the rewards but he didn't even read them????

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    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    hmm, what's the benefit she could gain for doing this with new disciples? And she won't ever fear of tricking someone prideful who will take it out on her if he or she grows enough?

    Ch 8 The Triple Thugs Extorting Money
    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    just say he wanted to try to extract it. Why talk about instinct. blergh.

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    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    Man, why did he enter the second stage?? He should have kept his base the same for a long time (HE doesn't NEED to progress just because he can, it's no like he would lose something) That way if he could become a outer disciple and meet people stronger than the deacon and more varied. The system keeps everything for him, it doesn't matter if he uses later! And he is risking an expert looking over and discovering his base, which would spell a thousand more troubles than just telling the sect. (if you hide there must be a reason) and yes I'm assuming mc can't hide his base from people too much above him unless he has system deliberate protection (not mentioned anything) or author just changed this part of the cultivation world to fit in his story, which is not a bad thing.

    Ch 2 The Unexpected Gain
    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Replied to TimHQ

    nyarlathotep

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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Replied to Andrew_Micucci

    yes, it is.

    They were one of the large families in Aria city along with two other families, the Epstein and Ford families, who were also famous for their Soul Spirits within the area.
    The Copy Mage
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Replied to ImNotNarcissistic

    that's a good quote

    Same Day On Loop, It's Been Thousands Of Years
    Urban · Mekka Pakka
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  • Jake_Sus
    Jake_Sus3yr
    Commented

    I'm getting annoyed with the mc. sincerely just hear the damn system, it's useful.

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    I'm a Stingray?
    Fantasy · MisterE05
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