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There is no lead-in to the plot and I started reading this book 📖 to see if it is my kind of attention holding story.

A little faster! Once you get to the point of your story then you might slow down some.

I hope you are going to pick up with the suspense and give us a little more details about the characters next! I'm unsure about the story plot and I've never really read a bxb tale before. This is quite interesting so far but I want more, of something!

So, let me get this straight, two brothers have feelings for the same Omega? And that Omega is a male?

He deserves to squirm every bit as much as he made Ava squirm and more! I hope she leaves him hanging with no release numerous times!

GREAT sexual immigration and way to grab the readers mind! I even feel the seduction you create!

It's really starting kind of slow! I am not giving up just yet, hope it picks up the pace.

I can't decide which book 📚 is the best! Each is such a turn on, very HOT!!!

Stupid ain't the best characterization of this story and NC! Or the author for that matter.

So NO readers have a problem/comments to this chapter? The author is treating her readers as if we are simpletons!!!

You really are making a fool out of the main character and that is not conducive to your readers to keep reading your story. I have noticed other comments that have been posted that indicate that the reader is not interested in completing the story.

I agree that the author is confusing. The difference between portal and black hole are considerably different.

This is just too weird and I don't know if I should keep reading it. The author isn't thinking about what she is trying to convey. Statements and what the characters are "thinking" are so confusing that I am getting a headache . I am going to stop right here and come back to the story later.

NOT very Smart!!!

Your grammar is not good . Please be careful with your sentences. Be more decisive when making your statements. Bad grammar is not a good thing.

This is not a werewolf story, as Bet is a werewolf second in command.

Not getting better!