Just let all of the dirt out!

Great read! Keep it up.

You do realize that VW is a German company, don't you?

These chapters are way, way too short. you would likely keep more readers if you weren't trying to cause us to spend more money, way too quickly.

Also, we had to pay for several chapters that were just you apologizing for not writing and such. The chapters are way too shower also.

This is honest feedback. Several times, you have forgotten things that you have written. For example, in this chapter, Alicia states that she told her maid about her magical abilities quite a while ago, during the 2 years of being away, yet Alicia had the plan, while going back to the capital, to tell her maid, after her sisters ball.

I can't wait to see how good this story gets, especially with this bit here that is very juicy.