Backyard_Gamer
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Backyard_Gamer4mthCommentedRedudent paragraph.
After a time that felt like an eternity for Sylvie, he finally pushed her schedule.- Backyard_Gamer4mthCommented
not feeling happy for the chapter(s) reading in privileged mode and coins wasted on it.. please reduce redundancy. Keep your writing ideas to jounal not to this published one (we are paying here) if you want to experiment, make your chapters free. please try to maintain quality over quantity.
Ch 182 Chapter 40.7 - A test - Backyard_Gamer4mthCommented
Redundant paragrahs.
The moment the guy before me realized Sylvie's occupation, he immediately dashed toward me, this time with renewed vigor. - Backyard_Gamer4mthCommented
Sentences are repetitive... could you please take that into account?
If Ethan is the hero that will save the future, then Sylvie is the one that will make him shine.