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Power corrupts absolute power corrupts absolutely you really think the government has ur best interest at heart ya I’m sure jacobs ladder was meant to be harmless and them flooding low income area’s with disease and drugs means they love us
It’s coming along very well I enjoyed the first iteration I really think this one will be even better please when you get time don’t forget about the divine summit those are some of my favorite type of novels and there’s not enough of them ur writing is very enjoyable and something I look forward to
This re write is better in some ways like his character more sucks that the old man’s gone but maybe your adding him further in the story keep up the good work this one flows better also more suspense and he’s less childish what happened to him has molded him better he did lose his child like self a little to fast tho better as a whole story is more rounded