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Afismus

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My books : A World Where Normal People Don't Live I'm not your idol Discord name :Afismus#2809 Instagram: itzafismus

2021-01-25 JoinedBangladesh
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  • Afismus
    Afismus9mth
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    A solid story. For someone who didn't read much reincarnation stories, this is not confusing at all. Your writing style is very good and moderate pace. Keep this up.[img=update]

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    Night's Shadow
    Fantasy · Pomu
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    First of all, this is maybe the first system book I've ever read. Though I don't know much, I'll still say the word play was fantastic, zinging the whole storyline, which is by the way, confusing at first. But I liked it. Good work, author!

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    Villain's Awakening System
    Fantasy · Aks_
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    oh my

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    Villain's Awakening System
    Fantasy · Aks_
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    you go, champ (both the author and the ML)

    Ch 1 What is your dream?
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    Villain's Awakening System
    Fantasy · Aks_
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Replied to bibiyenini

    thank you so much for your honest review. Still constantly trying to improve with help from friends like you!

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    I Am Not Your Idol
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    with my zero knowledge in reincarnation why can't she just be reincarnated

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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    I'm loving this already

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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    let's gaurrrrrr

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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Replied to Shade_Arjuun

    I'm happy you liked it 😊 just testing some different types of writing. What of the last chapter is missing here?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    I Am Not Your Idol
    Urban · Afismus
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    Wonderful descriptions. Love how you put up the scenarios. A good read for the werewolf genre. Keep going! Fun fact: I love the colour azure

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    The Alpha From The Aurelius
    Fantasy · RizzEditions
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    A good read. Loved the ending author's thought you put, made me think over the chapters again. I was a tad bit bummed when Avery died though...

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    Secret Code: The Marriage Proposal
    Urban · Kyrie_Sunbae
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    My oh my what a story! Absolutely love the plot, storyline, and writing style. Clap for the author. Keep it up, please![img=update][img=update]

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    Hide Me, Mister Billionaire!
    Urban · Kyrie_Sunbae
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    would be better if you wrote 'is it because of her, or because she doesn't know who she is?'

    Tilting her head to one side, she tried to think of her name, of her place, of who was the owner of this bed.
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    Hide Me, Mister Billionaire!
    Urban · Kyrie_Sunbae
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    I like it! The writing is good. Although a more detailed description would be great. Still waiting for a plot twist though (a plot twist is what draws attention to stories which have common plots)

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    The Game Called Love
    Urban · DurojaiyeAdedayo
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    Really love the writing style. Author did a great job reflecting the realistic world in the story. A good thing is, picky readers will like this too. Hope you will go a long way,

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    Mr CEO Chasing The Aloof Beauty
    Urban · AleeqaC
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented
    "And you said you're not interested. Pretentious!"
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    Mr CEO Chasing The Aloof Beauty
    Urban · AleeqaC
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented
    A handsome man with a piercing dark brown orb was looking at her with a dark look.
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    Mr CEO Chasing The Aloof Beauty
    Urban · AleeqaC
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Commented

    cool start

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    Mr CEO Chasing The Aloof Beauty
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  • Afismus
    Afismus1yr
    Posted

    I like this story. It has good writing and gets exciting after chapter 3. Thank you for the contexts you have put! Also how to kill a certain wolf name stella?

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    The Pack's Weirdo : A Mystery to unveil
    Fantasy · Mudita Upreti
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