it seems some reviewers have the patience of a toddler. yes the story is pretty slow. if you consider it story wise. but seeing as how hundreds of years have passed already in just 33 chapters it's pretty fast . i like the worldbuilding and background information. it's fun. all in all i like it and can't wait to read more.

it's a good story, but it's not this author's, it's a straight-up word-for-word copy of Reincarnation game book one from ffnet. disapointing.

for Max

The war started in 1970, Tom started calling his followers death eaters before even that but they weren't publically known, only people like Dumbledore knew about it before 1970, But now in the yr 1971 in which the marauders joined as first years, the war has been going on for a year, so they would know about it.

lighting is all well and good but have you ever PRAISED THE SUN

This is reaching isekai protagonist level of denseness.

it's the Snoop G O double D

Hestia do be bestia

slightly more paragraph breaks and include more spaces between changes from thoughts to spoken words but those are mere aesthetic changes, if you wish to improve your quality of the writing then i suggest you read more while trying to write some unrelated stuff in thier styles and then continue in your style, you'll notice you seem to have picked up some habits that you personally do not mind from a lot of the authors you emulated. i personally started with emulating the works of Charles Dickens and I've been told that my writing had become overly verbose after that. other than that my friend, practice, practice and practice.

it is of no concern to me. to do so or not do so is your own prerogative.

more of plot with fluff thrown in intermittently seems to be the consensus and i concur that it would be the outcome which i would prefer.

the relevant parts of the world shall be developed as necessary , for example, explaining the history of the wizengamot and how it functions just before Marcus joins the wizengamot for the first time would be better than to explain the wizengamot while reading about it in the library.

your writing of character interactions are too interesting and well written to be missed for the acceleration. most would be happy to see similar slow progress for such great writing.

This was by far my favourite way in which an SI was introduced to a new world. absolutely incredible i tell you. If I was sitting on a seat I'd be at the edge of it. Impressive writing, to the say the least. I felt the emotions of the character through the words, a great thing for a POV . Now I am invested in the story and would love to see what continues. Truly an enjoyable experience. Best of luck for your future writings.

i started reading it just now .saw it was a rewrite after I finished it and then read online the original one since it has more progress . and this started is simply so much better that i couldn't read the old one for long . as soon as he thinks to burn it I'm like, but the rewrite had a better idea .so yeah, guess imma wait.

absolutely condensed read but a fun no brainer read too.

aah man i was really liking this. didn't check to see if it was active. it's l nnda as it got dropped, it was a nice story.