Thank you for this review.

Thank you for this review.

Aw! Thank you so much for this comment. Will read yours if you have/currently writing one when I have time.

Hi. I do not know what this means but thanks.

thank you this comment. will read yours soonest

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Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an intriguing plot though: 1. Good idea to start the story with an interesting prologue. 2. Good language control. 3. Few edits are needed to but, everything is just fine. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.

Divide the longer paragraphs into two.

Revise this.

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an amazing plot though: 1. Grammar control needs to be rechecked since punctuation marks are all over the place. 2. You could revise add a prologue to make an interesting impact/impression to attract readers. So far, that is all. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.

"I, Lydia, walked towards the table...."

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an interesting plot though: 1. Starting by a POV for the first chapters is a bit boring for me. 2. Good language control. 3. You could revise the first chapters to make an interesting impact/impression to attract readers. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.

Thank you for this comment. Book 2 is already out too.

Aw! Thank you so much for this comment. Book 2 is already out too.

Thank you for this comment. Will read yours if you have one.

Thank you for this comment.

Aw thank you so much for this comment. Will read yours soonest.

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours, 1, Story wise, it has an interesting plot for a stranger like me, though change/edit the long title since it does not actually captivated my attention. 2. In my opinion, the shorter the title and more concise the better. 3. Grammar wise, consult an editor for that. Thank you.

change the phrasing on this one.