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  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Posted

    Story development from chapter to chapter is shite. Especially the paid chapters are all freakishly short. At the price noted this doesn't seem worth the value.

    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    · Webnovel Comics
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  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Posted

    The writing style and language are both somewhere between 'sad' and 'pathetic'. Not worth a read. Given the author hasn't updated in a while, I can presume with some confidence that was not worth writing either.

    altalt
    The Ultimate Lich
    Fantasy · AxlSLL
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Prisoners... 'moved'?? From ship to ship????? Dafuq you high on, author?

    He had spent nearly all of his time aboard sleeping, and he could swear that some of them weren't there before. They moved them from ship to ship without further explanations.
    altalt
    The Ultimate Lich
    Fantasy · AxlSLL
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Dafuq is a 'ghost sip'

    William didn't feel like speaking, his dried mouth not even allowing him to take ghost sips from his own saliva. But still, many things ran on his head, and the other prisoners seemed more aware than him about what was going on.
    altalt
    The Ultimate Lich
    Fantasy · AxlSLL
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    'above'? So like floating in the air? I guess baffoons = balloons+buffoons?

    "William Amber," spoke the prisoner of a shaved head and emerald eyes in front of him, a young man near his same age of 21 years old. "I saw you back on Sunia, right before these baffoons ambushed us. You killed three above that hill before they finally captured you, right?" he let out a tired grin. "Good job."
    altalt
    The Ultimate Lich
    Fantasy · AxlSLL
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Since the first sentence begins with a grammatical error - good start!

    Stressed waves crashed with the dark grey hull of the ship; the stink of fish, rotten wood, urine, and sweat making out with the air inside its lower deck, where the only cell room was located. The thick clouds blocked all sunbeams from transversing the cracks on the swollen wood, and a screaming bell announced their near arrival at their unknown destination.
    altalt
    The Ultimate Lich
    Fantasy · AxlSLL
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Replied to Patient_Zero

    The true owner is always the secretary

    You Ye nodded: "It’s just a small trick, and only works on ordinary people who don’t have a strong psychic force."
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
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  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    How ~magical~ Trafford's Trick Bucket

    While saying this, You Ye walked to Luo Qiu, gently adjusting the bangs covering his forehead, her fingers glided from his forehead down to his cheek. Then, smiling faintly, she held his hand and said softly: "Close your eyes. Imagine that you want to reach Jin Zifu’s factory, and the club will respond to your request…"
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
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  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Something with fangs, horns and a tail.

    Luo Qiu asked curiously, "What did I look like in your imagination?"
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Dafuq is "en"!?

    En…That’s all he knew for now. Luo Qiu nodded in his heart. Then…there was no then.
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    So he observed it AFTER getting trapped and not BEFORE saying "I wanna have this club 😍"!?

    There were only a few pages to the booklet, hence Luo Qiu finished it quickly. Then he started to observe the club carefully.
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Like you can do anything else after your soul is bound there

    Take things as they come.
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Oh please. Everyone dies. It's just about how long you live and how well you live before you bounce.

    Generally, won’t die…
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Shorter than Truss' tenure, though.

    "Thirty days."
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Dont they change his name to Trafford?

    When he woke up, the boss had disappeared, leaving behind a letter stating some facts that Luo Qiu needed to know.
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    "The 'man of culture' gives a chuckle with his inner voice"

    Hehe…
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    For you, maybe. For others, maybe not. Humans are not all the same, and there are those that would prefer to have less company (they're called 'introverts') - and likewise the rare few that would prefer to have no or zero social contact. Otaku culture is one example of this to the east. There are isolationists in the west as well. It may be uncommon - but it's certainly present. And who better to have that skill at lvl 99, than the MC 😏

    "But why do I yearn for it?"
    altalt
    Trafford's Trading Club
    Urban · White Jade of Sunset Mountain
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Yea just dont get ShangHaied

    This was where Shang would join the true rank of the Warriors!
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Blankly walked around with a money bag in his hand. Yes.

    Shang left the Mana Austerum and blankly walked along the street.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
    detail
  • livercool
    livercool1yr
    Commented

    Should get one of them changed into silvers and coppers, else you'll need to buy like 9,999 apples every time you need one spare copper

    Cindy nodded and took out a sizable sack of gold. She poured a lot of gold on the table and counted in front of Shang. After counting out the 29 pieces, she shoved the remaining pieces back into the bag and put it into her Space Ring.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
    detail