Mayhem_Wolf
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The story is quite complex and makes the environment tense. The development is quite good. writing quality is top-notch, but I think it's a bit too overly complexified which actually makes it a bit tough to read. the only reason I took 0.2 stars away is that. but it's not bad, to be honest, it's just a bit too complex. Potential novel here.[img=coins]
Life doesn't care about ambitions much. DEEP
That's a good sentence, I liked that
suggestion- It should be women, as plural. Woman is singular. womens is not correct
Refinement in the writing would do a world of difference to this novel. I do recommend reading this. It's pretty good, to be honest, but the writing style is just a thing that takes the point away from this writer. 3 stars just so that you have a lot of room for improvement. Just don't get demotivated and drop this. IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL.
Tbh I have many times.