The book was very good, the only criticism is that some of the sentences don’t read correctly, possibly it’s ghe translation software?

I swear she doesn’t have a fg ounce of sense.

I’m confused why suddenly Caitlin is a witch when the enrire story has been about her NOT using her power or being a witch at all. Now, all of a sudden she’s a witch guru?!?

I guess this was just to make the book longer? Why do such an unnecessary thing as point out what a witch would know?🙄

Omg…if her ears bleed anymore she will have no blood left. 🙄😂 I guess that would be fitting, considering how many times she has wanted to dig a hole and bury herself🙄🙄🙄😂

All eartlings are white?!? The original HUE-man is Brown…how did we get to them only being pale, pasty, pink and afraid of the sun only. 😂😂😂 Y’all wish😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Good book, good character development, minimal typos and a good storyline. Only thing is the ending felt a bit rushed but people have lives and there’s no telling what causes the rush. Thank you for writing.

Great book, the characters were developed properly, although there were some annoying parts concerning the heroine it was still a very good read with little typos. Thank you 😊

You have problems for being an internet arsehole. If someone wants to read it nothing is wrong with them reading it. Nowhere did I recommend it, actually I did the opposite. Annndddd… Fuxk you, come find me here in Mexico and say that shxt to my face fuggin keyboard warrior. Don’t get it twisted bitxch and take my kind words for weakness…I’m still a Detroit girl at heart and I’ll dog walk your motherfkn ass.

The white suit is so tacky😂😂🤣 Is this Cuba or what?!?🙄🤦🏾‍♀️😂

Poor old guy, he just wants grandkids in his rough life. The kids will probably be ruined, especially if they’re boys but nonetheless…😂

This cray cray😂😂

Hayden crazy but she should have known that by the way he goes HAM on her in the bedroom. 😂🤣☠️

She is so fg annoying…he done ran all up in her numerous times, yet she is still trying to act like a virgin. Very annoyong.

I’m sorry guys…You should still read it. I am a grammar and writing nerd so what bothers me may not bother you? 💙💜💚

Seriously, who cares about using the bathroom in front of someone? We ALL have to go because we’re all human.🙄🤷🏾‍♀️😂

Really? She can’t guess that folks don’t just disappear and that she’s been in the mafia radar for some time now? She was a contractual clause, they’ve been keeping tabs since her birth more than likely.

Great storyline, character development and proofreading. I also appreciate that you did not privelege chapter your readers to death. Keep up the great work! Thank you for writing. 💚💙💜

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The storyline was unfortunately lacking and the characters were very one dimensional. There were also numerous typos and places where the wrong characters names were used which made it very hard to follow the story. Sorry, just being honest.