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GenXPrays

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Poeta. Escritor. Educador Comunitario. (ANCED: 69957/16. España) Computación, Liderazgo y Gestión Empresarial. URP. Perú. Dirección de Proyectos. BID. EE. UU. E-Learning Instituto InterGlobal. EE.UU.

2021-01-15 JoinedPeru
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    It has poetic features. and philosophical. for a previous existence and for a life of natural coexistence

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: "Who am I?"
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    Beyond every tiny things
    Sci-fi · Wine_ImmortalGod
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Posted

    Excellent writing. Rich in nuances of language. At 6 chapters per month. That's 1.5 chapters per week. Likes the appropriation of the environment. From a family setting to a shared room. With common spaces: with interventions typical of two great friends. One is passionate, jovial, helpful, while long-suffering, amorous, playful. The other is serious. Scheduled. Deliberate bias in your shared space. Simulate good coexistence. Respect for women.

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    The Mafia Couple
    Urban · Rayne_Rue
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    Enchantment and disenchantment. The pass of doing and letting do. Of respect and imposition. Of the portent of man and the right to coexist.

    Ch 4 Jerk
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    The Mafia Couple
    Urban · Rayne_Rue
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Posted

    It is good writing: with a jovial description, in contrast to the real settings. It's perfect, for so much activity to write significant updates. Drive well: both worlds. He, of the "contemporary" protagonist and that of the "monarchist" game itself. He is a leader of his own family team. He knows how to bounce back from adversity and measure his and his co-stars' steps. Great wealth of scenarios. With vivid narratives.

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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    Awesome! How lively, development. Delegating. Freeing. Slipping away.

    Ch 4 Volume 1.3 Deja Vu (3)
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    The real environment is lived, as if it places the reader on the stage waiting to find the protagonist and keep him company. I'll have a drink and I'll go, then dance!

    Ch 3 Volume 1.2 Deja Vu (2)
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    And the empire of the Raven?

    This ball as mentioned before, commemorated the Foundation of the Empire of Raven. It has been five decades since the empire united the kingdoms in the Continent of Hasha. And this was their second ball in the spring of the year. No matter what I looked at, nobles and royalties from other allied kingdoms, it was just the same thing to me.
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    Beautiful description. Master writing. Kudos to Kingdom Media editors. (like there is a medieval - contemporary mix)

    "Of course, pink hair and eyes like spring blossoms could only belong to one household within the empire, Lady Melissa," Then I faced the other girl. "And glossy green hair and eyes like emeralds like yours, Lady Eunice; anybody would be able to recognize who you are, with both the ladies great qualities. Not only that, plenty of news about the ladies talents is always on the newspapers."
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    What an interesting opportunity to discover the world at a party. Having passed a slip of life.

    'Ah, she must be anxious with all this attention. This is her first ball and public appearance after recovering from her disease.'
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    I like the introduction ending with individual reference, AND those full names. The prelude to the dialogue between sisters: with diplomatic purposes. Whose duty to attend events. And the right to choose a husband.

    Ch 2 Volume 1.1 Deja Vu (1)
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    Nothing compared to his personal bewilderment at the age of 18.

    'You don't need to hit my hands with a fan.' My thoughts that I didn't dare to voice out.
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    I don't remember that date? What was the media reporting?

    March 15th,1029, the Sun Era
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    Your attached note made me think of what I just read: (1) The domain of the player, on the game itself. So much so that he did it without a routine: three times. And the goal was made to continue with the update: it does not reach 5 years. (2) The personal dilemma, which shuffles the position of being the real protagonist: of the game, running -among the advantages for insurance collection- the benefits for family members. It is noticeable: an unequal domain of a fictitious scenario; nothing compared: To the reality of the character.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    So, it should change from princess/queen to: Governor/President in the context: monarchical/democratic.

    The second ending was where the princess became the queen and ruled the kingdom. She ended the monarchy system and established a democratic rule.
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    Royal Survival
    Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Replied to big_nono

    I used to write sermons. Speech for classes of several hours, for weeks. I think it's my unique "theological" style of writing. And romance, and fantasy with a bit of war and system. How about you check out one of these romance novels: BITLOVE: https://www.webnovel.com/book/bitlove_19277591006022105 DARKMAN: https://www.webnovel.com/book/darkman_19459519205380705 Webnovel wants to hire as exclusive writer. And I'm in the detail of following the series.

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    Academy Artesan Procreation
    War · GenXPrays
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Replied to KARMA_7

    How about I support you with more comments as weeks of reading go by. I can moderate your novel if you allow it. Support with review: https://www.webnovel.com/book/academy-artesan-procreation_23934150405486205 I invite you to a Club of reading moderators. Discord Server: GenX #9340

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    Go Home a Like Turtle
    History · GenXPrays
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Replied to Nature_Lover18

    How about I support you with more comments as weeks of reading go by. I can moderate your novel if you allow it. Support with review: https://www.webnovel.com/book/academy-artesan-procreation_23934150405486205 I invite you to a Club of reading moderators. Discord Server: GenX #9340

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    Trashed 08
    Fantasy · Nature_Lover18
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Posted

    I have read little of this genre but each work is a masterful staging of battles, so detailed, with exaggerated skills of the protagonist, and this one brings: cunning, tricks, strategies. A true warrior, sagacious, intrepid, hidden, patient, trained in battles that wins in death or the animal state that he had to live after suicide.

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    The adventures of my isekai life
    Fantasy · AKHIL_GOYAL
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Posted

    There are two very subtle, marked, vibrant events. The intrigue of the contrasts remains, to evoke an intermediate process! I am left with my heart in my hand! Emotional musical interpretation. Narrated in jarring but accurate scenarios for the reality focused on the synopsis and the cover. Go on, I will read you for weeks.

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    The Abused Accompanist (Chapt 2 out now!)
    Teen · bab027
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  • GenXPrays
    GenXPrays1yr
    Commented

    There are two very subtle, marked, vibrant events. The intrigue of the contrasts remains, to evoke an intermediate process! I am left with my heart in my hand! I haven't put the compact disc in the case yet.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    The Abused Accompanist (Chapt 2 out now!)
    Teen · bab027
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