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Daoist7umUjl6mthCommentedCh 395 395 - The Maid's Blessing- Daoist7umUjl8mthCommented
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"Deal with the invader himself?" UInzoku laughed. "How bored must Immortui be?" - Daoist7umUjl8mthCommented
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The large trees with branches as thick as tree trunks were struggling as some of their roots were being pulled from the ground. - Daoist7umUjl10mthPosted
Good idea. Painful to read. Author has zero editing and there are numerous spelling, grammar, punctuation, plot, character errors etc. Save yourself the time. By the time you’ve paid to read this you will be mad at yourself because there are well published authors making less on a well drafted story.
- Daoist7umUjl10mthCommentedCh 2196 An Agent of the gods
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Before he was just using the natural power of his body nothing else, but there was a way he could move a little faster, and that was with the first stage of Qi. Qi was now being used to enhance his body. - Daoist7umUjl1yrCommented
Would it really be difficult for you to employ an editor? For the prices paid overall for the publication, investing some of that money into hiring an editor could be a way to improve the writing. That then could lead to further more professional publication of your work. Just don’t know why you’re settling. You have a great idea and concept. The work needs polishing
Ch 2147 Who's the fastest (Part 2) - Daoist7umUjl1yrReplied to Rando253Ch 2088 A reason
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The Green Liquid, at first the vampires were all relecutent to use it, as they wished to use their own power, but as time went on, and as supplies of it, as well as higher grades of the Green Liquid, were past around it became almost a dependency for vampires. - Daoist7umUjl1yrCommented
Nap time
"You saw how dangerous the Chained could be. Fortunately, not all of the Chained were siding with Russ, and those that were, we need to keep them in check in case they create any trouble. In fact, We, the Blade family, have unanimously agreed to keep the sinful Chained members in check and not let them ruin anyone's lives. We pledged to make up for our family's doings. - Daoist7umUjl1yrCommentedCh 1652 Blood brothers forever
- Daoist7umUjl2yrReplied to FinklebampCh 240 240 - Bat
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Instead of an answer, a red beam came shooting out towards him. Rather than match it in power, Quinn decided to avoid the strike by running toward him in a circle. The aura was hitting the trees and going a great distance, destroying everything. It was sure to gather the attention of others soon. - Daoist7umUjl2yrCommented
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Still, he had turned the ground underneath into a pit of endless mud. Usually, the Dragon would have been able to lift its other leg, but it was unable to this time. This was because its other leg had landed into one of the traps that the sixth family leader had set up. - Daoist7umUjl2yrCommented
Stop rehashing the previous chapter in the following one. We will re-read ourselves if we need to recall something
'It hasn't even been that long of a time, you know. Rather, if you consider how old I and Bel are, you could say we met just yesterday,' she said, teasing him.