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I know this is 2 years later from your reply, but in his pov…Serena moved on quick. She never tried to contact him and moved on to Geoffrey. He sent many letters but she coldly never responded. Both of them haven’t communicated nor had the chance because of constant misunderstandings. I absolutely loathe what’s going on but I can just look at the end of the rainbow when they finally get together.
For the words at the end of the chapters cant you just put it in the space designated for that? Ik that you need a certain word count for the Price of the chapter and i cant help but feel it should be like 1 coin less🥲mainly because it doesnt contribute to the story but advertises it instead so its not needed imo to be there when there is a space where its meant to be
This is a fantastic plot but the mc has such backwards thinking. The mc thinks that girls who wear revealing clothes are sl*ts and gives off the holier than thou feeling because she is a virgin and pure or whatever that just screams pick me that alone is annoying but there are a lot of times when she is so conservative and Just weird especially in the first few chapters when she beats up abels cousin killing her over and over its so extreme and weird how accepting everyone is im suprised no one is talking about this