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velaryons do have kings blood
i am still thinking on where ned failed to educate his children, robb was honorable but not as honorable as ned, as he did kill many people and even sent 2 thousand soldiers to their death, yet he is basicaly the best king ya can get on a 15-18 years old boy ( i forgot his age on the books/series) his emotional side was a problem, but even that was normal, nobody expected the freys to do such a dumb move, sansa is basicaly educated by catlyn, and by all intents and purpuse she is a perfect daughter just very naive, arya is like lyanna but even her has respect for ned, rickon and bran as well, though ned wasant very present in their lives, he made sure to make each moment impactful as possible to them. well i just ranted a lot, forgive me if i misspronounced something as english inst my first language
normal fire, he said wildfire, that would be just as strong as dragon fire, and targs arent imune to it
loving the story, i dont think much of how the protagonist want to serve daenerys, cus i always like followers mc povs, and please remove the gunpowder, above all i think agot as a story focused on individuals, and having guns will just remove the chances of you writting amazing fights, battles or even the tension of the entire war overhaull, so yeah maybe iq and physical points, maybe even some medieval resources or knowledge like crop rotation, damascus skill { only for him or the queensguard} but anyway. i loved the story and i have quite good hopes for it man, have a great day and good luck
man although I know the deal with the god emperor the fact that he still doesn't want to be a god is vaguely ridiculous when he is already summoning his own demons ( the angels) and even having his demon prince ( selestine if I remember right) it would be all easier if he just accept the fact he is already a god, then somehow disappear or kill himself, then appear again after all wars end like he always did when he was on earth, so much easier than he being so fixed on not being a god while he is
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