Where did the writing stability go? The entire novel it felt solid if a bit lacking, but here it seems more like someone didn’t understand the language and wrote it.

Whats the point of the KG worldbuilding if fujin won’t even get one? Seems like word filler honestly.

Except he doesn’, because this isnt even the same shallot they bonded with. All this does is cause problems lol.

I’m kinda confused. Did they travel through time and end up meeting a non insert shallot? Kinda sad about the missed bruce bromance though , that could have been a fun exploration.

Again, this is enti dependent on the people involved. please stop giving out blanket statements on matters you clearly aren’t experienced in

L. Harem gang for the win

This is an incredibly stupid take and I hope you realize that. Monogamous absolutrly has drama, go outside and experience the world, please.

LMAO. You can barely spell in your response, and with what little I got its clear you’re nothing but some loser who cant take negative feedback. What a sad child you are.

Honestly this story started out ok and I was really enjoying it, then the author started trying too hard to be “anti meta” in the story. I honestly should have figured from the sypnosis, but the author goes out of his way to make sure that he can claim to be spechul for his “originality”. From things like the MC being AGAINST stat points for the first 30 or so chapters, to constant remarks that felt more like author notes mid story then actual dialogue. Things that come to mind are when he was about to go fight a demon he had to explain in his internal monologue that he all of a sudden wasn’t becoming a battle maniac. Another example was him actually explaining that him saying “take the world as my own” wasn’t literal. Little comments like these just made it seem like the author was breaking the fourth wall subtly to try and speak mid story and it felt disconnecting as hell. There’s also the fact that the MC is kinda….bland. Nothing really stands out and the recent shift from “fish out of water” to “let me taunt and take down and entire group of thugs/criminals” feels jarring as hell. I understand he’s been working towards that but it kinda felt like a whiplash because it seems to have sorta come out of left field. There’s also some weird personality change I seem to have missed? At one point he was threatening and actively trying to kill Harley and now all of a sudden the author is saying he won’t kill anyone? What? Its just sort of a jumbled mess all around. The writing quality (as in grammar and sentence structure, not plot) was great (for webnovel anyway) though. So kudos for making an actually readable story.

So was the AN about future lemons just a lie?

what is this even supposed to mean?

What's your point? By your logic its going to be suspicious that their daughter went missing anyway, so it literally doesn't matter. Not to mention, who are they going to suspect, the random kid who couldn't have possibly known about any of this?

Is it possible for him to put their bodies in his storage? Since their corpses, he should be able to use their eyes for himself and their daughter in the future to not go blind.

You’re a moron

It is indubitably that time, for another banger. In all seriousness, this one has been a blast so far and its only gonna go up from here. Can’t wait to inevitably body pain :)

I for one, am looking forward to older wendy lewds. In all seriousness this one is pretty good. Its got a pretty based and under appreciated magic style as well. Would give it a read.

……that’s like saying because Goku went super saiyan because of his close friendship with Krillin, he shouldn’t have any other friends.

Honestly don’t like the revealing thing in these stories, but the good writing and reasoning have softened the blow so its not the worst. I just hope there wasn’t some stupid convenient villan/entity listening in because…..reasons. As for the harem debate, literally just make it Kara and Raven. All 3 have bonded at this point, and if she’s going to be staying with him something will more then likely happen anyway…..plus I just like the way you’ve written her and want to see her waifu’d lol. I think you should stop it at that though, the other 2 haven’t felt nearly as good character wise for something like that (then again that could be just because we haven’t gotten as much time with em, I’d still just prefer the 3 way.)

Literally just keep it as Raven and Kara.

I hope the multipliers get fixed later on with how wrong they are.