This is so good. Like the mc (though a bit "immature" now if yk what I mean) is still really strong. I like that and all, but how is he supposed to find someone strlnger to like have a fight or feud or whatever with? If he's the strongest, whom will he fight? I mean I already kinda have a guess 'cause it's gotta be the "real" father that went *poof* and disappeared, but will he be strong enough to rival lur mc??? And if he is, then will our cute lil mc be able to finish him off at the end (since he'll still win even if the dad is crazy strong as well, riiight)??? anyways overall good story. I like it, so please syart updating again. It says it's been oike 10 mths so please please pleaes dtart updating agaaaain!!!.! i mean I know that it's difficult times now and all that ,but still plzzzz. Oh and stay safe and healthy!!<3

I understand where you're coming from but don't you think he'll learn and u know develop n stuff. Like character deveopment? I think this is all just to show the change more clearly, if you know what I mean. But please don't misunderstand, I kind of agree with you, but I just thought that things might get "better" later.