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WriterForFun80085

WriterForFun80085

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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
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    Pros and Cons to each proffesion in the story. Magic Technician: [Pro: Fits well with setup, and would further enhance his skills. Cons: Does not add anything insanely new for him.] Divine: [Pro: Can be used to set up future plot tension, and also useful if a certain plot detail is relevant (the tower wanting him to do something] Magic Scholar: [Pro: Further his skills as an elite mage that crafts his own spells and furthers his research. Cons: Not really any, other than could get repetitive or contradict existing magic system.] Ritualist/Occultist: [Pro: Powerful, could set up future schemes, could be used easily with his large access to money. Cons: Doesn't fully fit with what the tower seems to want him to become.] Illusionist: [Pros: Fits with his build well, grants more versatility and future schemes are enhanced. Could be combined with Alchemy and Array Master to create the ultimate trap. Cons: None, other than the fact could be giving up larger scale firepower] This is for you author san

    Ch 142 Torture
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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  • WriterForFun80085
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    ...that's a bit impatient for a one time annual event that only 20 participants enter into

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    Affinity:Chaos
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  • WriterForFun80085
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    Author-san, despite the negative feedback for past two chapters, you don't need to worry about making up for it too much.

    Ch 83 Chapter 82 – What is Madame Elisa Doing Here? 
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  • WriterForFun80085
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    Replied to WriterForFun80085

    I truly don't recommend spending fast passes or coins on this novel, but do so if you truly enjoy the story.

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    I'm Not an Evil God!
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
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    I am back to redo my review. The story shows great potential in the beginning, but once it begins to go into more details, the concept seemingly derails. The MC in the beginning is adjusting to life in this new world, he's seemingly been there for a month, which explains how he's situated. (I'm going to try to avoid nitpicking) Now, it seems he has been dealing with the array that sends things like books and monsters to him for a short time. And (Spoiler) when he eats the Chaos Wolf eggs, he gets physically strong enough from eating them that the monsters that come out of the array are mincemeat to him. It is explained later on that no one attempts to eat them because eating them can make them crazy. This alludes to either the fact that he IS the Evil God. But it is actually another thing I'll explain in a second. Things aren't that bad here. Weak MC needed power up, magic food is an easy shortcut. Not a horrible jump. Now, the MC, also attempts to read the forbidden spell books. This makes sense, curiosity likely got the better of him. But even then, he should be perhaps a tad suspicious. But it's fine. But then, it turns out, that by simply forcing himself to read it more and more, his 'mental power' can be raised by a lot. This is the other, more likely reason he didn't go crazy. However, this seems to be a flaw in the power system. If one could simply gain so much 'mental power' by this method, why weren't they doing what he did? Also, simply eating the eggs seemed to have given him 'Gold Rank Strength.' This is lazy writing that may bother some readers. And then, when he becomes the adventurer, of course, a situation for the MC to display his newfound power (and slight ruthlessness?) against bandit type of enemies in an escort quest. However, this isn't that bad of situation in my opinion, this NEXT part is why I dropped it. We get little bits and pieces that state that James has been in the world for 2 months, a few years, 4 months, etc. The timing isn't consistent, and his background still isn't explored after 25 or so chapters. certain parts are rushed, and certain parts are spread out too much. To summarize: Has a good start, but rather than ride on the concept that caught the reader's attention, the story steps on that in order to simply give a cheap explanation for an isekai, which is used to simply give a cheaper explanation to avoid giving the MC background. The feel I got from the story, is that the author wrote up certain scenarios, and then tried to string them together.

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    I'm Not an Evil God!
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
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    Also, a tip for the author. When writing in the concept that Hades once flew into a rage over something and attempting to allude to such for later context, it is better to give a small piece of what happened, but not much. The reason behind this would be so that this certain scenario could be brought up in a smooth fashion, so that when this is explored, the reader wouldn't skim over the detail.

    Ch 82 Chapter 81– Devon’s Missing File [18+] 
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Replied to GodOfDeath1999

    I mean it's not like rape is consensual

    Ch 82 Chapter 81– Devon’s Missing File [18+] 
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Replied to Trpstars74

    ... I mean it's not like rape is never "not forced"

    Ch 82 Chapter 81– Devon’s Missing File [18+] 
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
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    I'm going to keep reading, because despite the negative feedback from other readers, I think these chaps are fine as long it all makes sense and works out

    Ch 82 Chapter 81– Devon’s Missing File [18+] 
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Commented

    All right Author-san... I'll trust you here

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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Replied to melonball

    Alright then

    "Pleasure me."
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Commented

    *sigh* Hades was the only decent god in Greece

    Ch 80 Chapter 79 – The Manager Is Back [18+] 
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Commented

    This bothers me. Hades was basically the only half-decent greek god. But now, he has to be a villain

    "Pleasure me."
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  • WriterForFun80085
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    Replied to NightWind

    yeah, I hadn't realized the event until later, I rarely check my inbox

    Ch 130 Otto's Big Haul
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Commented

    thx for chap

    Ch 79 Chapter 78 – A Lich’s Rescue
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    Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
    Commented

    Did something happen to your contract? Because there are no more locked chapters for me (Not complaining just wondering what happened)

    Ch 130 Otto's Big Haul
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
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    Enchanting and Summoning. Enchanting for obvious reasons. Summoning for cat girls...

    Perhaps it was time to add another profession?
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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  • WriterForFun80085
    WriterForFun800853yr
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    She'd be stupid to not have a revival item.

    Then, he wondered...he had been saving this for the safe zone, but what if he had used it on that white robed girl?
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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  • WriterForFun80085
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    Replied to 13KillerShadows

    I wish to request to the author, let Otto get the summoning profession to summon a catgirl

    Your voice has a magical connection with all beast-type animals and monsters. Communicate your intention by adding mana to your voice.
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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  • WriterForFun80085
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    Replied to Gira18179

    His intuition is incredibly high because of this already.

    He didn't think he'd be understanding the mechanics anytime soon, either, because this spell required a whopping 203 intuition to learn.
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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
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