VictoryDNoire
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As the name suggests, the land is cursed; cursed by a powerful witch to eternal darkness. Our skies are always night. With the moon and stars constantly overhead, we tell the passage of time through the cycles of the moons. There is no Rhyun shining his face above us yet, the crops still grow, and the season's turn. While the rest of the world calls the passing of Rhyun, morning, noon, and night; we call the passing of the moons early night, midnight, and dark night. - VictoryDNoire1yrReplied to Tan_Shan_8564
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How old are these people. They seem to be in high school but they have very adult toys, even for royalty.
Inuharu continued to amuse himself with thoughts of taking a vacation and maybe even convince his precious angel to come with him as he walked to his Harley. Inuharu mounted his beautiful black and red motorcycle and headed to his favorite underground club. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
. . everything Kir told him.
"Whoa..." Is all Moose was able to come up with for a response to this new information. As Moose slowly processed everything that Kir had told me, he felt complete and utter rage at the man who dared to bite the princess. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
as they pulled up. . . third to first person.
"I do think that you should wait to tell me until we are away from prying eyes though." Moose suggested as we pulled up to the entrance of the main house. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
since they left the academy grounds. Third person to first person swap.
Kir looked over at Moose who'd been silent since we left the academy grounds. "Moose, if I tell you what happened back there, will you promise not to tell another living soul?" The reptilian man stayed silent until we reached the gates of my house, the Bastet Manor. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
You can put a characters inner dialog in italics and the reader will know they are thoughts.
'I can't talk to Kirala about it right now either because she already made up her mind about what she wants to do. I certainly can't tell Roo, he would kill Asher on the spot without a second thought. I could tell Kaoru, but then he would tell Kilo and Kilo would tell Roo anyway, since he doesn't like Asher either…' Kir thought to herself. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
she corrects.
Kir laughed "At first? Ha! He still treats them like that, he's just more lenient with them now because he knows that they're harmless." She corrected me. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
After they grabbed lunch, they headed to the forest to eat and talk.
After we grabbed our lunch, we headed out to the forest where we met earlier today, to eat and talk for a bit. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
. . . before backing out of his reach.
Kir caught herself right before she hit the ground and used her momentum to swiftly punch my ribcage, before backing out of my reach. Asher laughed, actually starting to have some real fun sparring with this insanely strong and fast woman. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
Kir said with a warm smile, following his advice and watching his stance before deciding her own.
"You're right, thank you." Kir said with a warm smile on her face as she followed my advice and watched my stance before deciding on her own. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
. . . hoping she doesn't take his advice as criticism.
"Before worrying over how to position your legs, you should try to focus on your opponent's positioning, it will make it easier for you to pick the right positioning for yourself." Asher said, hoping that she doesn't misunderstand my advice as criticism. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
Asher walker over to Kir cautiously, knowing her brother is in the room, watching them like a hawk and hoping Asher with give him a reason to make good on his threat.
Asher walked over to Kir cautiously as he knew that her brother was somewhere in the room, watching us like a hawk, hoping that I'll give him a reason to make good on his threat. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
Kir and Asher began taking up their positions. . .
Kir and Asher began taking up our positions as instructed, however she seems to be having difficulty figuring out which defensive stance she should use. - VictoryDNoire1yrCommented
Third to first person switch
"Alright, Miss Bastet and Mr. Romanov, I want the two of you to work on some kickboxing techniques. Kir I want you on defense this time, Asher you'll be on offense." The teacher told us, pulling me out of my dark thoughts of all the different ways Inuharu will torture me simply for being partnered with his sister.