Hopefully the story produces content soon. I will check back later

I picked this book up hoping it was going to be a brilliant read. trying to read it was a problem for my eyes. Trying to listen to the story was a problem for my ears. The premise of the story could be amazing, it failed in its execution by having such limitations as bad grammar, confusing sentences that merge several ideas. Hope you get an editor because I look forward to reading the story

this rework of an already popular theme and not an original story there is little value in this story .I was hoping for something interesting, was disappointed .😭

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I love how you brought forward Emma's brilliance as a swordswman with her being able to read emotions and body language. She noticed that he was not feeling the effects of the pain. I wonder what else she will notice, I hope she becomes aware of the other people colluding with Arthur.

The opening chapters in this book screams you need to read this adventure. I love the premise of the main character struggling with what defines family, how to keep them safe, how to reconnect with distant family, kith, and kin. The story explores what it means to be responsible for the development and safety of those who trust you. I like that the main character does not follow a cookie cutter prescriptive formula for character development. The mc is forward thinking and reflective about their own way to develop. I am eager to read more material from this author! [img=update]

Love the main character and his struggle with circumstances. Looking forward to seeing this book have tons more chapters. The quality of writing makes it worth rereading many times. Definitely need more support from readership [img=update]

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This is a great story and I need more.

I think Ren might capture some new troops. Hellhounds might make a good addition if they get the dark baptism.

Tina time

nice chapter

hidden mage causing extra problems?

looking forward to what The King left behind in the next pagoda. Perhaps we will see a some type of recorded history or special way to impart knowledge to the winner. Lilith has got to be terrified about BZ's condition .

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I look forward to reading more from this author about the main character and this particular universe. the story so far as well thought out, the character is not a hidden weak to strong archetype. Rather, he uses the abilities he is given to make the most of the situation. When given lemons, I suspect the main character would open a lemonade franchise.

nice story, thanks for the efforts. hope to read your next masterpiece

Interesting world building, the characters have flaws that allow us to relate to their obsessions and quirks stronger. I like the story and am waiting for the author to return to actively writing.

I am looking forward to when you return. having a good editor will help the writing become smoother. keep plugging away as become a better writer takes time. Cheering for you!

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