Dear Author, the thought of you doing a worm fanfic brings me the utmost joy. I would dearly appreciate it if you did in fact decide to start writing a worm fanfic.

Bro this book will take years before she hits higher levels if it takes like 70 chapters just to update the status once and not even level up.

Dude is this a translation? It's taking like 3-4 chapters for her to move like 3 feet and every chapter is filled with nonsense, while sentences are repeated with slightly changed language. In the chapter where she fought the bandits you described her senses in like three different sentences with minimal changes. I don't to read a book that repeats itself three times every chapter and fills itself with nonsense just to fill the wordcount.

Glad you have returned to this book bro. I was really enjoying this book and became disappointed when it stopped uploading. Excited to see where you take this.

Was there a chapter that was skipped and supposed to be posted before this one? This chapter seems to be picking up from a previous conversation and jumping straight into the action.

One partner please. Once again, I would like to suggest Ororo Monroe for the female love interest. I have said it in a previous chapter, but I think it would be interesting to see what type of attacks her storm powers and his winter powers combined would be like.

Seven years old? Wasn't he 4 years old last chapter?

I would like to see Ororo Monroe for a few reasons. One, I think her weather powers would go extremely well together with the winter powers of Jack. Two, she is not used very often and I would like to see a story with her for once. Three, seeing what combo attacks they could do together sounds like a fun idea. I can't think of any other reason off the top of my head but I would really appreciate it if she was the only love interest. Harem stories are done far too often and I would like to see a story with just one female lover for once.

Cool, I have read the previous versions so I am looking forward to the new and improved one.

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Alex??? Isn't his name Dannis?

In the synopsis, it says "greatest killing mission." That's a typo correct?

Why are all the words smashed together with no spaces?

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In chapter 1, it said she would be reborn at the age of 5 yet here, it says 3? Is this a mistake or did I miss something important?

When her status first showed, it showed her HP at 300 and MP at 175. After her 2 level ups her HP increased 200 points from 300 to 500 and 75 points from 175 to 250. This was before she added stats so why the increase and also the disparity between the increases.

I'm confused... So judging by when she leveled up from 1 to 3, each level up gives 5 stat points. So leveling from 3 to 10 should have only given her 35 stat points, yet she earned 90. She hadn't absorbed the corpses for the extra stat points so where did the extra 55 stat points come from?

Glad to see you have returned my dear author. It was terribly boring when you were away and I am excitedly waiting for the next chapter.

Thanks once again for the new chapter Author. I'm excited to see the changes to canon when it comes along.

Dear Author, This book is by far my favorite Fan-Fic. When I first started reading it, I was impressed by the clear and precise writing along with the story as a whole. It was the first time I had read a fan-fic I found genuinely more impressive than the story it was based off of. I Just wanted to say although I don't have the money to support such an impressive author, I will continue to read this story until the day it is finished. All the best.