"because this novel has a LOT of potential and chaotic writing may scare potential readers away." What can they say they gave a affinity for chaos

"his loved ones were destroyed right in front of him" is it just a one and done sort of thing [1ch] or is it drawn out over a couple ch's? never really like the mc or those close to them having bunch of suffering

I demand MOAR at the rate it's going all the officials of the palace will be attending his tavern, really can't wait to see what reaction he'll have when he learns the truth but that probably won't occur until his system activates.

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Second wonder what the combination of cold and water constitution is? blizzard? [since cold should be ice]

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second wonder what type of constitution she will have

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Probably Emma seemed a little to eager where as Sarah was a bit reluctant

Second, well hope they don't end up changing to the point they can't be saved but one of them will probably end up dead

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