I was really looking forward to reading this novel. To my disappointment it turned out to be another brainless perverted mc. such a waste. The harem tag is missing, based on the perverted mc this is definitely going to be one. I would have skipped it if i knew it was a harem, just not my kind off novel. others who like the harem thing might like it. Good luck with the novel.

It's refreshing to come a cross a gem while shifting through a lot of garbage novels. I enjoyed wasting my valuable free time to read such a great novel. The story is fun and exciting. There are no over explanations just to fill a chapter. The humor isn't exaggerated but part of the story. All the characters are interesting, yes even the extra's. As for the mc, well he comes across as a real badass with a soft hart. I really hope he won't become some simp. I personally love the interaction between the system and the mc. There is not much interaction between them, but when there is, it's good and fun. All i can say is, nicely done author a true masterpiece in the making. Hope you stay true to your own artistic ideas.

The story is refreshing and fun to read. I hope the mc keeps developing in a fun and exciting way. I personally hope it won't become a harem. it would be disappointing to ruin a good novel. it would be great if the author keeps to his own artistic ideas. long story short a masterpiece in the making.

I also think the title is fine. But it's your novel. Good Luck

I like the novel so far. Very entertaining and fun to read. The novel develops at a steady pace. there are no over explanations that brake you out of the story, which many novels sadly do. I am looking forward to reading the novel till it's completion. I just hope it won't become a harem. It will ruin the story. A lot of authors should take this novel as an example of how writing is done correctly. Keep up the great work. Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as i loved reading it.

A good book isn't made, by making it a harem. Dons books are a perfect example of this. Its about the quality of the story, the characters and the world, how it develops together in a great book. Harems are nothing more than badly written porn books. i can do without. It's sad to see that most writers focus on writing harems, just because sex sells. hope to read more of your great books. I for one enjoy them.

The story is not bad, just too bad you went the harem route. You should add the harem tag. I would have skipped this if i had known. For a harem it should be fine. It's just not my kind of book. good luck with the book.