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Zane_Skyer

Zane_Skyer

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2021-01-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer2mth
    Commented

    Relatable

    I then do what every sensible married man does when they realize it's already their anniversary: I panic.
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    Ruling the World with my Robotic Girlfriend
    Sci-fi · ProjektBlue
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer2yr
    Replied to Ken_Reader

    Thank you for the treat. And bruh. You really need an editor.

    Ch 33 33. Assembly
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    Unomalous (semi Hiatus)
    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer2yr
    Commented

    "embarrasse" It should be "embarrass".

    Girl 2: "Alright go form a line behind the muse & escort. And James, *turns towards him* please smile and don't embarrasse our class."
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    Unomalous (semi Hiatus)
    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer2yr
    Commented

    "Let's go to our class girls." It should be "Let's go to our classroom girls."

    Girl A: "Ah bell is out, let's meet again next time and continue again after this. Let's go to our class girls." she said, excusing herself and dragging the others leaving them in a hurry.
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    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer2yr
    Commented

    For more emotion, go for "Don't you even dare to think of taking her picture!"

    Girl: "Yea don't think about defiling the image of the most precious Saint of our school."
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    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Commented

    Do the event with the crossdressing one then ....an invasion of those "Unknowns".

    Ch 32 32. The Troubles (2)
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    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Commented

    Why not?

    <Yes>
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    Unomalous (semi Hiatus)
    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Commented

    [img=recommend]

    <Yes>
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    Unomalous (semi Hiatus)
    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Commented

    Ah, this soothes the soul. (BTW, ken reaction, check ur novel email)plz

    Ch 30 Chp. 30
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    Unomalous (semi Hiatus)
    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Posted

    These type of stories are my favorite with advanced technology. You really had chapter 8 get the company a bad relationship with the government. Is it too much to ask for an underground mega-base for research powered by the MC and Athena? Connected to the ocean and the introduction of some more countries in this? PLz? This is too awesome to not read. [img=recommend]

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    Black Tech System
    Sci-fi · TempestWolf1013
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Replied to Ken_Reader

    I can proofread for you if you need a proofreader. English is my native language.

    Ch 26 Chp. 26
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    Unomalous (semi Hiatus)
    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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  • Zane_Skyer
    Zane_Skyer3yr
    Commented

    Amazing story! Beautiful details and storyline Could use some work on grammar though. Is the story translated?[img=recommend]. If so, do you need proofreaders?

    Ch 26 Chp. 26
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    Fantasy · Ken_Reader
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