I truly feel relieved they are finally tapping into their passion

Ian has won before the challenge could have begun

Harland has a death wish

Kiss her already

I dont know about anyone else but I enjoy Ian teasing Elsie

kiss her boo boo better

so far so good

Finally seeing Hazel show some strength, about time!

why is it locked all of a sudden

I like the story but unlocking chapters gets more frustrating as you get more involved in the story.

seriously, I love it...cheeky

Team Ian

I love that she is jealous too

I love his jealousy

this story continues to keep me reading.

I like the progestion of the story so far. I want to hear more of Ian and see how Elsie fits into his plans

so far I'm interested to continue reading

I'm not a fan of having to wait to read short pages. there are other reading apps that have better set up, hopefully the app developers will look into other ideas

I like the story so far. I am not a fan of how you have to earn points or coins to to read it but that's life. too bad because I know a few reader who would enjoy reading here but won't bother with coins