Jacquelynn_Heller
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Simple mistakes constantly are destroying this story!
This could have been an amazing story. However, the grammar is atrocious. I find myself trying to understand the mess of words, becoming more and more angry. Half the paragraphs make absolutely no sense, at all. Do yourself a favor and find an editor that is actually suited for the task. Your using words out of context not understanding their true meaning. it is like this book was written in another language and haphazardly translated to English.
Jesus this grammar
you really need an editor that understans grammar. All the mistakes are ruining the story.
However, Torak ignored Calleb's concern, as his eyes were fixed on the road before him.
????? makes no sense.
very confusing first paragraph.
This story will grab your attention from the get go. The story line is an original Alpha Werewolf type. There are some spelling errors but not enough to destroy the story completely.
*former glory
*staring