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olamarcel_14994mthCommentedbruh- what does her being good-looking have to do with anything?
The small short-haired girl wasn't good-looking, but her eyes were strong. She looked at Tang Mo. "Are you trying to get something from someone else? Is it related to your ability? Can I give you something so that you will become stronger?"- olamarcel_14991yrCommented
these are nice
With your open hearts, accept this sermon by the Lord's bard.♫ - olamarcel_14992yrCommented
you still areq
"Hah! And someone called me a hypocrite before this!" Upon hearing this, the One-Eyed Dragon glared at Thales. - olamarcel_14992yrReplied to BrotherLoneWolf
Where did he say he's regretting killing a good person? It's just a fact of life- if you are able to kill anyone -good or bad- be ready to be killed yourself. Why kill someone and feel like you should be exempted from being killed?
"If a person kills, then he must also be prepared to be killed." - olamarcel_14992yrCommented
Exactly
'Lastly, I have only managed to prove that those incidents are correlated. The grounds for causal reasoning are still inadequate. - olamarcel_14992yrReplied to raven7195
? literally this is not a racial slur. what are you on?
Then Kessel the Fifth's thick and sonorous voice rang beside his ears. "He looks like a skinny mud-monkey." - olamarcel_14992yrReplied to LegolasGreenleaf
It's not the same world yes. But the Mc is from another world. A grown adult at that. He can't just suddenly change his world view albeit very gradually.
'This is not a good thing,' he reminded himself. Becoming psychologically insensitive would inevitably lead to deviated behavior. - olamarcel_14992yrCommentedCh 1 Reincarnation
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this was very rash
The Trawn woods resounded with screams for hours before death could come to claim her prize. - olamarcel_14992yrCommented
Isn't there a religion that believes in incarnation?
'Oh man, this means all religions are dead wrong! Luckily, I never believed in any mumbo jumbo, otherwise I would be really disappointed right now.' - olamarcel_14992yrReplied to olamarcel_1499
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Alot of clichés to be frank. Story development is okay but character design needs to be better. Author should explore character motivations more in depth especially the side characters. Side characters tend to fall under cliche characterization. World building could be better. In short, the author needs to research more on topics, ideology and settings they introduce to flesh out the story more. ...Also author should find other ways of reinforcing a character's quirk for example, "Roan is not interested in having romantic relationships" does not have to be reiterated every 5 chapters. Saying it once is enough, his actions should tell the rest.
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Because the authors never know how to write them
He had spoken for a long time, but he was not met with a reaction. Meng Jiang turned his head to look and was surprised to see Li Yao’s pair of eyes staring blankly, gazing at Si Jiaxue’s picture. The look in his eyes was serene and remote, leaving no clues as to what he was mulling. Meng Jiang promptly tapped the head of his best friend, “Hey kid, it can’t be that you fell for Si Jiaxue? I’ll remind you out of the kindness of my heart. This women is indeed untouchable for you and I. She and Helian Lie are childhood family friends. Rumor has that their two main families have the intention of joining by marriage. And also, Helian Lie has her as a must-have target. Don’t you even look at this tall insurmountable power, for he has the smallest tolerance. Never has he allowed anyone else to get close to Si Jiaxue. Last time, it was a fresh transfer student who didn’t know his limits. He let out a declaration that he would pursue Si Jiaxue. The result was that in ‘Martial Arts Class’, Helian Lie broke three of his bones. As for us mish-mash of students, Helian Lie only needs a single sneeze to cause us to cough blood from internal injuries.” - olamarcel_14993yrReplied to DabMaster27
I guess it's what your born with then enhanced with help from money. maybe the slum guy had a natural high affinity.
Take the arrogant heaven’s chosen one’s of the Important Class as an example. Everyday, they consumed all sorts of heavenly materials, earthly treasures, and strengthening concoctions. They purchased special “Actualization Quotient Trainers” for home use or they went to “Underground Cultivation Shops” for special training. The amount of money they spend on opening their spirit bases each month varied from being less than several tens of thousands to being over dozens of billions. Only by demolishing mountains of gold and silver could they increase their Actualization Quotient by a single percent. - olamarcel_14993yrCommentedCh 6 The Great Dark Age
- olamarcel_14993yrReplied to _Yokai_
isnt it the other way? time is equals to distance divided by speed? i.e metres ÷ metres/secs = secs
“A cultivator on the right path of the ‘Spirit Mountain Guild’ steps his foot onto a flying sword. He flies from the east towards a ravine at a speed of 247 meters per second. And another cultivator on the depraved path of the ‘Blood Murder Stronghold’ treads his foot onto a black cloud. He flies from the west in the opposite direction at 239 meters per second. Currently, the two people are separated by a distance of 122.5 kilometers. The question is, how much time later will it take for them to meet?” - olamarcel_14993yrCommentedCh 4 Fiend Blade Peng Hai