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Jon_Ian1yrCommentedHAHHAHAHAHA. No support at all
"But I came up with a solution."- Jon_Ian2yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2
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Yuck 🤢. That must hurt a lot in real.
A clear reflection appeared in the mirror. His temple had a grotesque wound with burn marks along its periphery. Blood stained the wound's surroundings and there were grayish-white brain juices squirming slowly within. - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
It is because you are meant to be on that way 😂. It is pretty good to be in feminine side 😎.
He almost cringed. If he's going to be reborn, why couldn't the Lord God pick a manly young adult? Now, he's stuck with this body. - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
Yeah! Just think in that way. It'll make you on the bright side.
Luo Yan shook his head. No, he should not think about that anymore. That life of his already ended. He was given another beginning. Because now, it's official. He'd been reborn into a 17 year old young master with a face and body of a pretty shota. - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
Yeah! That's maybe the case 😱.Just kidding 😁.
LUO YAN was in a daze. He didn't even notice when the doctor came in. A very big sign that he was still in shock. He just couldn't believe that there would come a time in his life that he would experience the famous 'rebirth'. He thought that could only happen in webnovels. Wait- what if he wasn't actually reborn but instead he actually crossed into some webnovel? And now he became some character in that webnovel. Maybe he even became a canon fodder! - Jon_Ian2yrReplied to DebbylovesMattie1Ch 1 Snake Bite
- Jon_Ian2yrCommentedCh 4 Burnt By the Silver
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So cruel, right? How could parents like that do that!? It's literally a no go 🤬.
"Mum..." I started but she broke in ;" Don't start young lady . We took you in when you had nothing and treated you like a princess . Is it too much for us to ask you to marry the wonderful young man , just to save your father's business?" . " Mum...I..." ; " Get ready now . I don't want to hear a word out of your mouth ". - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
Hey author! 👋. Just a suggestion, maybe it is better not to stick conversation together. Like when someone said something and then a period or a sentence is just the gap of the next person's response. 😁 It's kinda messy to understand but the story is literally good, I swear 🤩. Hope you'll add this staff!
Ch 1 Snake Bite - Jon_Ian2yrCommentedCh 3 BEING BORN ONCE AGAIN
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Again, what's the feeling? How lucky he is, he's ahead of time and now know what's the feeling of being a fetus 😂.
He was currently inside the woman's stomach. Which meant the woman was pregnant and he was the fetus inside her. And this warm liquid around him was nothing but amniotic liquid. So, did that mean that this fetus was now his reincarnation? - Jon_Ian2yrCommentedCh 2 NOT DRINKING MENG PO'S SOUP
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Oh! I get it. So just like that? For me it's hard to forget what had just happened, you know. When you already got your gift in life and suddenly all turns out to be an instant 🥺.
The soul would drink it and then they would forget the experiences they had in this life. They would then reincarnate as a blank slate without the memory of their past life. - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
What's the taste? Can you still digest it? It must be nice to have a food even your dead 😎.
The line started to move forward. And he finally stepped on the NaiHe bridge. There was a woman standing on the bridge handing soup to the soul passing by. He couldn't see her features but he was sure that that woman must be Meng Po and the soup he was giving to the soul was the famous Meng Po's soup. - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
Yeah, that would be great. Even when you die there is still a 'department' to go to. You can't possibly be lost 😌😸.
He was actually quite surprised that this place actually existed. He thought it was just a part of their country's myths and legends. But what about other countries? Would they also have their own 'death department'? Surely, they would. It would be weird for a foreigner, like an American for example, to actually be facing Yama's judgement. - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
Maybe the saying of ' great happiness will later be sadness ' is true. Just like being a Chinese, there is always a balance to the world 😂.
He couldn't understand what kind of bad luck he had. When he thought that things were finally going his way, something would happen that would stop that. It's like the universe was just preventing him to have his own happiness. Was that it? Because he was too happy winning the award, the universe finally decided to put an end to his life? - Jon_Ian2yrCommented
😂 the choice of words is a real funny. I can't stop laughing.
Yes, the cause of his death was indeed choking. How stupid was that, right? He could already imagine the kind of headline it would make the next day. 'Newly crowned movie emperor died at his apartment! The cause? A big piece of grape stuck in his throat!'. If he wasn't dead then, he might just die of extreme mortification.