Who doesn't appreciate some good Oyakodon? Anyone who can't understand it's greatness simply has no taste.

Honestly, I don't mind when a protagonist takes issue with fantasy slavery and tries to unexist it, especially when the slavery system is one of the more unforgiving ones that emulate slavery as experienced in our world. It can even make for an interesting arc where the protagonist frees an entire race of people and restores them to the power of a country, or at least gets the ball rolling. The main issue comes from when an idiot comes in and tries to screw with things without understanding or thinking through anything. Some authors really don't think much further than "Slavery bad, me include slavery, MC stop slavery, MC look good" and, while things like that have their place, that is a very boring setting to see repeated a hundred times over.

Sorry to comment on a 2 month old comment, but is there any real difference between Yasenia impregnating one of the girls and her getting impregnated by Andrea? Or is it simply that you don't like the idea of them having kids at all in the novel? I can kinda understand the latter, kids in amy series have a good chance of ruining the entire thing if not handled well, but I can't grasp the former.

Codependency can certainly be worrisome if not addressed properly. If she becomes like this every time they get separated there will truly be issues, both for Yasenia and her own cultivation(Yasenia constantly worrying about how Angel will feel if she leaves for training or missions or excursions and Angel likely forming heart demons over the, even if temporary, abandonments)

I'm sorry, but I just don't understand. Yasenia's mentor, who's name escapes me at the moment, said she wanted to let Yasenia feel frustration by failing to use the sword properly, but then Mason comes and she just...allows him to tell her? What was the point of her struggling for a week then? It's not like she felt all that much frustration, and it's not like there is much frustration to be felt from simply failing to use an extremely high level weapon with absolutely zero guidance or information on what mistakes she was making. It just makes it feel like Yasenia spent a full week making much lower gains training wise outside of comprehending her elements for absolutely no reason. Apologies for the long rant, it's just that this entire situation confuses me.

Eh, there are much worse things for one to be into. I should know, I'm the number one degenerate 'round these parts.

Y'know, I can't help but doubt that considering the woman who has mastered the law of fate specifically gave you 5 "slots"

People like this guy are what give harems and other such relationships a bad rep in novels like this. I get wanting to have someone that can increase your power easily, and even being aggressive in order to obtain them, but at a certain point you have to act like a reasonable adult right? Yeah yeah, might makes right or whatever stupid rule cultivation worlds have, but acting like this ruins the trust anyone has for you being a worthwhile individual/power to associate with.

Honestly, it could be a lot worse. She and her family are dead, but she can still experience the world, even if only as a spectator, and she can take a bit of solace that she knows where her family is, even if they are only mindless thralls to be used for battle.

Wait, was this originally posted on ScribbleHub? I actually came here from AO3 because I thought this was where the images were. Eh, too late to go back now, plus the comment feature here is easier to put my thoughts together anyways.

The aftercare segments are always so nice to read. Really sells that Yasenia loves her women dearly.

I love how you explain all of Yasenia's skills in depth rather than giving them a basic single sentence summary and then kind of making it up as you go like other cultivation novels. It's nice to have a very solid grasp on what a character can do with each increase in power

Dao/Element comprehension/understanding/philosophy is always so cool to read in cultivation stories. It's interesting to see how the author explains the characters insight into an element, as well as the idea that 2 people can have the same element yet be capable of wildly different things

Hands-free orgasms are perhaps the hottest thing in existence, and I will accept no other (wrong) opinions on this matter

Things like this entire situation with Evelyn's parents are why communication is such an important skill to have in literally any relationship, let alone one as complex as having multiple partners. Sadly 98 percent of people in cultivation novels that aren't a few millennia old have the communication skills of a particularly rusty fork.

Evelyn's dedication to breasts is one that I hope to replicate someday. Truly a messiah of culture

I love it when cultivation antagonists do absolutely zero research on whoever they're going after. They really picked the one woman in the school with a technique that, at minimum, has to do with the sun and moon, and they pick the time where the sun is at its strongest. It's like fighting a water cultivator in the middle of the ocean at high tide.

I love when characters eyes change colors with emotion. Or just characters with unique eyes in general. They're some of my favorite fantasy tropes

I will never understand some of the people on this site. Why would it be a big deal for the harem members to sleep with other harem members? This is the one thing that has always confused me about Webnovel commenters and is why I usually wind up turning comments off while I read. I would ask the person in question but I'd rather not Necro a year old comment thread. Also, sorry in advance, author, if my comments from early parts of this story will be spamming you, I like leaving my thoughts while I read sometimes, even if the story is rather old.

This is the one thing that always bothers me when I try to read this series, and is why I have to keep restarting. I love everything else about it, but the fact that Yasenia always thinks she is being "unloyal" when she thinks about dating multiple people just makes me feel weird, especially since she isn't being unloyal if everyone in the relationship is happy and consenting. I just hope someone tells her that in the future of the story.