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Very exciting, well done. im looking foward to the battle and the Status of alicia

I Did not see that coming. gladi vs leon. im very excited to Read about their fight.

Cant wait!! Well done. very Eager for leons and alicias reunion

This book is getting more and more exciting bY the chapter, well done

Wonderful job, well balanced

Beautifuly crafted well done

Love the stpry line! When will the next chapter be released

Love the story line! When will the next chapter be released??