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Shikikami2yrReplied to Novel_CrazyBy just adding few words can be more detailed so why choose to only do the minimum.
Alex nodded, "I assume you level up on them?"- Shikikami2yrCommented
Sara would've hugged him tightly if it weren't for his armor or her sister who's straddling him. This show how happy and relieved Sara is.
Sara would've hugged him tightly if it weren't for armor or perhaps Stella on Alex's back. She was that happy and relieved. - Shikikami2yrCommented
Alex found out that she was oddly happy.
Alex found out that she was rather too happy. - Shikikami2yrCommented
Why give just a incomplete information x_X Either you give the whole information about why collect intel, for what, how and so on or you just don't explain his action by this 'cause rly normally narrator/author perspective is here to give private information that MC and other doesn't know, here it is Half done.
If that was the case, Wolfen Demon decided to gather as much intel as possible. He wanted to see more of Stella's Ultimate Skill, and he also wanted to bring out Sara's Ultimate Skill! - Shikikami2yrCommented
Seriously ? Like wow, the interaction's really rigid and who is enough dumb to ask their opponents why so strong and explain it in front of the monster? I feel like we're in a cultivation novel instead of a VRMMO or game-like novel.
"You are just level 30, yet your strength far exceeds that. Even if you are classified as a boss, you shouldn't be strong enough to make Stella use her Ultimate Skill. What happened to you, and who are you?" Sara pointed her spear at the hungry demon. - Shikikami2yrCommented
His happiness was short-lived as the duo noticed a golden pillar..
His happiness lasted until the duo noticed the golden pillar on the horizon. - Shikikami2yrCommented
Writing seem a bit weird I read few author books and didn't find their writing weird but here idk why but it doesn't seem natural, it's like a one-sided story. If said negatively, I would compare it with those wish fulfillment ff r-18 novel on WN( writing) but a bit better.
Ch 10 Lazy healer and weird cat - Shikikami2yrCommented
Alex didn't deny it.
"Yes," Alex didn't have to hide that. - Shikikami2yrCommented
And before Alex could ask another question, Sara said "Are you curious why my level is so low ?"
And before Alex asked another question, Sara said, "Are you curious about my low level?" - Shikikami2yrCommented
"I assume you gained your level by killing them? "
Alex nodded, "I assume you level up on them?" - Shikikami2yrCommented
His body stink so much that Alex directly headed toward the bathroom to quickly wash himself.
He smelled so much that Alex immediately headed to the bathroom. - Shikikami2yrCommentedCh 4 Skeleton Capitan